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【命题解读】

真题是最好的习作练习，如何分析真题，如何从真题中寻找写作思路和表达方式？都

是学生需要学习的地方，练一篇真题胜过练十篇模拟试题，所以本专题只带着学生复习真

题，学习和研究真题中的读后续写。

【真题 1】2022.6 浙江卷（帮助无家可归的人）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

I need to do something in my community(社区)in order to complete the community service

hours required to graduate from high school. Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a

soup kitchen, so I did, too. It seemed like a good thing to do.

I thought that we would just be passing our dinners to those in need, but I found out we

would be doing everything from preparing to serving the dinner. We began preparing the food,

from mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat. Much still needed to be done before dinner

was served, but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering. It wasn’t until

a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner.

As the line of people came toward me, I got a little scared. I’d come face to face with the

homeless: How should I act? How would they treat me? Would they hate me for having more than

they did? While some of the people looked very friendly, some of them looked so dangerous, I

didn’t have too much time to worry about it. I was assigned (分配)to serve the salad with the lady

next to me. She smiled at me and said if I needed help, she’d be right there, which I found quite

comforting.

I had never seen so many people wanting food. They were of all ages and nationalities. Most

of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty. Some looked like they had totally given up on life,

while others seemed to be making the best of the situation, smiling and joking. Some were better

off than others, but they all needed a good meal and a warm place to eat. It saddened me to think

of how many people there were who didn’t have a place to call home and the only food they got

came from a soup kitchen.

Paragraph 1:

As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile.

_______________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph 2:

I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way.

_______________________________________________________________________________

参考答案：

As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile. Nervous as I felt, I

did my utmost to keep myself calm and hand out the delicately-wrapped meal to those in need,

with my hands trembling. Upon seeing it, every one of them beamed with smile, gently murmured

“Thank you” and bowed to me sincerely, which brought warmth straight into my heart. The

passing time witnessed the smooth process of this event. It was not until the night wiped out the

last ray of sun that we finished our community service hours.

I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. Not only did I clear my

previous prejudice against those who seemed to be dangerous and unamiable, but also I extended a

helping hand to those who wanted food. I suddenly came to realize that not everyone was blessed

with fortune and born to be wealthy, therefore, we should always keep grateful for what life

blessed us with. However, we did have the power to share our happiness with others, that is,

spreading love. Love is everything, like the clear moon hanging high in the sky, spreading its mild

moonlight selflessly to everyone.

【真题 2】【2022 年新高考 1卷】

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in

and around the small town were warming up and walking the route(路线)through thick evergreen

forest.

I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a

fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over

and asked him why he wasn’t with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided

not to run.

What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event!

I quickly searched the crowd for the school’s coach and asked him what had happened. “I

was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,” he explained uncomfortably. “I gave

him the choice to run or not, and let him decide.”

I bit back my frustration(懊恼). I knew the coach meant well—he thought he was doing the

right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming

towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.

David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children,

but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participated to the best of

his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that

David had decided to join the cross-country team. It just took him longer—that’s all. David had

not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children,

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