《中考考前作文押题 》专题 06 青山绿水 金榜题名（解析版）

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专题 06 青山绿水
青山绿水无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的享受。今天，选择的 2021 年中考
英语写作预测话题是：青山绿水。
【预测题目】
（一）
绿水青山才是金山银山，我们的家乡衢州经过“五水共治”后，天更蓝了，水更绿了，吸引了更多的
外地游客来游玩。作为衢州的一员，我们该怎么做才能让家乡变得更美？请自拟题目写一篇有关衢州环境
保护方面的短文（80 词左右）。
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【答案】
How to be a greener person
Now, we are faced with a major problem is environmental protection, which is very important to our
lives .What's the meaning of “green”?It means do something good to the earth.And how to become a “greener”
person?Being a greener person is being friendly to the earth as well as all the human beings in the world. Try your
best and we will make a difference.
First,you shouldn't throw litter about and not spit anywhere in public.Second,you'd better walk or ride a bike
instead of taking a bus or a taxi if you travel a short distance.Third,you should recycle boxes,newspapers,cans and
plastic bottles .Finally,you'd better use both sides of paper.What's more,you are supposed to turn off the lights when
you are not using them. If you follow these suggestions,you will start turning green.But as the saying goes"Easier
said done." So it's time for actions.And let's be a greener person.
【解析】
试题分析：这篇短文要求学生以 How to Be a Greener Person 为题，写一篇有关环保的短文，并适当发表自
己的看法，词数在 80 词左右。同时写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。这篇短文主
要告诉大家：目前我们面临的最大的问题——环保问题。环保问题对我们来说是很重要的，那么我们应该
怎样做才能保护我们的环境，成为一个环保人员呢？
写作亮点：这篇短文很不错。作者根据题目和要求，分析中国目前的环境问题，直接点题 How to become
a 'greener' person?紧接着做出回答 Being a greener person is being friendly to the earth as well as all the human
beings in the world. Try your best and we will make a difference.下一段通过 First,Second,Third,Finally,What's
more…具体说出应该怎样做才是保护环境，成为一个合格的环保人员，并倡导大家马上行动起来，共同保
护我们的环境。
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走在长沙的大街小巷，我们可以看到“打赢蓝天保卫战”的口号标志，越来越多的市民已经认识到环
境保护的重要性，还天空以蓝色需要我们共同的努力。请你写一篇英语短文给某英文网站投稿，谈谈目前
的环境污染问题以及你对环境保护的建议。
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要求：
1.包含以上要点，行文连贯；
2.80 词左右；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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【答案】
Protecting the environment is everyone’s duty. Our environment is very important for our lives. But now many
trees are still cut down. Air pollution and water pollution are very serious. The environment around becomes very
terrible.
We should take action to help to protect our environment. First, we should plant more trees to make our city
greener. Second, we can turn off light when we leave a room. Third, we can ride a bike or walk to school or work
instead of driving. Fourth, we must learn to save water. and we should use cloth bags instead of plastic ones when
we go shopping . More and more citizens have realized the importance of environmental protection, but everyone
should play a part. I believe our earth will become a better place to live in.
【详解】
题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。根据题干给出的材料，可知主要介绍目前的环境污染问题，及对环境保护
的建议。主要采用一般现在时，第一人称。写作时要避免汉式英语，尽量采用我们熟悉的句式，保证语法
正确，符合英语表达习惯。
例文点评：短文紧扣要求内容完整表达流畅.文中使用了 First，Second，Third 等来介绍环保建议，使得结
构清晰，叙述有条理。短文使用了非谓语动词，被动结构，宾语从句等，提升了文章档次。
高分亮点：
短语：cut down，take action，make our city greener，turn off，instead of，go shopping，More and more
citizens，play a part.，a better place to live in
非谓语动词作主语：Protecting the environment is everyone’s duty；被动语态：But now many trees are still cut
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