Unit 2 单元话题满分范文必背-2022-2023学年必修第一册单元重难点易错题精练（牛津译林版2020）

Unit 2　Let’s talk teens

单元话题满分范文必背

1．假定你是李华，你的朋友 Tom 因为和父母之间有一些分歧，给你写了封求助信。他的烦恼有：1. 他周

末想看电视，可是父母除了学习，什么都不让他做。2. 父母不理解，觉得他每门功课都应该是班上最好

的，还经常看他的日记。请你根据以上情况给他回信并提出建议（至少两条）。

注意：1. 短文应包括所提供的所有内容，也可以适当发挥。

2. 词数：100 词左右。

Dear Tom,

___________________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Tom,

You told me that you feel unhappy recently, for you disagrees with your parents about what you should do or

what you shouldn’t do.

You do well in Maths and Chinese, while you finds English and physics difficult to learn. You’re is under

great pressure from studies. However, your parents don’t understand you and insist that you should be the best at

every subject in your class. What’s more, they often read your diaries. Besides, you feel like watching TV at

weekends, but your parents allow you to do nothing but study. Worst of all, you’re so annoyed that you shows no

interest in your study at all.

I think, first of all, you should communicate with your parents, telling them your trouble. And you should cheer

up as soon as possible, working hard to quality yourself for a job in the future. Additionally, you’d better turn to

your teachers for advice and make a plan on how to improve your English and physics.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】

第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你的朋友 Tom 因为和父母之间有一些分歧，

给你写了封求助信。他的烦恼有：1. 他周末想看电视，可是父母除了学习，什么都不让他做。2. 父母不

理解，觉得他每门功课都应该是班上最好的，还经常看他的日记。请你根据以上情况给他回信并提出建

议（至少两条）。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：disagree with（不一致）；do well in（擅长）；under great

pressure（压力很大）；insist（坚持认为）；besides（而且）；cheer up（高兴起来）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观

的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】

范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如However, your

parents don’t understand you and insist that you should be the best at every subject in your class.运用了虚拟语气；

And you should cheer up as soon as possible, working hard to quality yourself for a job in the future.非谓语动词

的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明,

上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。

2．假定你是李华，最近你的美国朋友 Tony 在与父母相处的过程中出现了沟通不畅的问题。他心情不佳，

来信寻求你的帮助和建议。请根据以下要点给他写一封回信，内容包括：

1.安慰朋友；2.提出改善家庭关系的建议；3.表达祝愿。

注意：

1.词数 80 左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总次数。

Dear Tony,

___________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Dear Tony,

I am sorry to hear about your communication problems with your parents, but I know how you feel since I’ve

had similar problems before. Here are my suggestions and I hope things can get better soon.

First, let’s put ourselves in their shoes. Parents love us and often try to prevent us from making mistakes that

seem obvious to them. Besides, when we share our problems with them, we often look for a listening ear and an

open heart, not a solution.So, what you need to do is tell them about this difference and put trust in them.

I hope these suggestions will help. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友托尼回信，对朋友给予安慰，并就如何改善家庭关系向

对方提出建议。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

建议：suggestions→advice

明显的：obvious→apparent

另外：besides→in addition

信任某人：put trust in sb→believe in sb

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Here are my suggestions and I hope things can get better soon.

拓展句：Here are my suggestions， which I hope can help things get better soon.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】Parents love us and often try to prevent us from making mistakes that seem obvious to them.（运

用了 that 引导定语从句）

【高分句型2】So, what you need to do is tell them about this difference and put trust in them.（运用了 what 引

导主语从句）

3．假如你是李华，有一个好朋友叫王刚，进入高中后，他的学习压力越来越大，常常熬夜，而白天却打

不起精神听课，学习成绩每况愈下，为此他很痛苦，写信求助于你。请你写一封信给他，提出一些自我

调整的建议。

注意：

1. 词数 80 左右；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Wang Gang,

___________________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【答案】One possible version:

Dear Wang Gang,

I’m sorry to hear that you are having difficulty in learning. Here are some pieces of advice, hoping they are

helpful to you.

Unit 2 单元话题满分范文必背-2022-2023学年必修第一册单元重难点易错题精练（牛津译林版2020）

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