浙江省精诚联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期12月联考英语试题读后续写科学路上的逆袭：艾玛的坚持与胜利

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In a small town in Iowa, sixteen-year-old Emma Thompson

was an ambitious student with dreams of becoming a scientist.

Every year, the local high school held a science fair, and Emma

had always placed high but never won first place. This year, she

was determined to change that.

Emma spent months working on her project, a study on

renewable energy using algae ( 藻类 ),. She recorded data, ran

experiments, and even stayed up late into the night perfecting her

presentation. Her parents often found her working at her laptop,

surrounded by books and lab equipment.

One evening, a week before the science fair, Emma was

working on her project when her laptop screen suddenly went

black. Panicked, she tried to restart it, but it was no use. All her

data, notes, and the presentation were on that laptop, and she

hadn't backed up her files.

Desperate, Emma took the laptop to the local repair shop. The

technician told her it would take at least a week to recover the

data, if it was even possible. Emma left the shop, feeling a sense of

despair. How could she possibly recreate everything in just a few

days?

Returning home, she sat on her bed, fighting back tears. Her

mind flashed back to a conversation she had had with her science

teacher, Mr. Reynolds, earlier in the year. He told her the true test

of a scientist was not in how they handled success, but in how they

overcame failure and that innovation often came from the ability

to adapt and persevere.

Emma let Mr. Reynolds’ words sink in. She realized that this

was her chance to prove herself-as a true scientist. Determined to

make the best of her situation, she began to gather all the resources

she still had. She found her handwritten notes, some scattered ( 散

乱的) papers and relied on her memory to recall key points of her

research.

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Taking a deep breath, Emma decided to start over.

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After the fair, the winners were to be announced.

文章大意：在爱荷华州的一个小镇上，16 岁的艾玛怀揣

着成为科学家的梦想，为当地高中的科学展精心准备了

数月关于藻类可再生能源的项

目。然而在展会前一周，她的笔记本电脑突然黑屏，数

据丢失，这让她陷入绝望。但她想起老师曾说过的话，

决定重新开始，凭借着之前的手写笔记、散落的纸张和

记忆，努力重建项目。

故事山分析：

开端：艾玛是个有抱负的学生，一直想在学校科学

展上夺冠，为此努力准备关于藻类可再生能源的项

目。

发展：临近展会时，她的笔记本电脑崩溃，数据丢

失，这给她带来巨大打击，她去维修店得知数据恢

复至少需要一周，而此时距离展会仅剩几天。

高潮：艾玛在绝望中想起老师的教导，决定克服困

难，重新开始准备项目，她四处搜集资料，重新做

实验，日夜忙碌。

结局：科学展结束后，开始宣布获奖者，故事在此

处留下悬念，引发读者对艾玛最终结果的好奇。

五处伏笔以及在续写中的回应：

1. 伏笔：艾玛一直梦想成为科学家且在之前的科学展

未获一等奖，这次决心夺冠。

回应：在续写中，艾玛克服重重困难最终赢

得一等奖，实现了自己的目标，呼应了她的

梦想和决心。

2. 伏笔：艾玛花数月准备项目，认真记录数据、做实

验和完善展示，体现她对项目的投入。

回应：即使电脑数据丢失，她凭借之前积累

的知识和经验，重新开始并成功完成项目，

展现了她扎实的科研基础和坚韧的精神。

3. 伏笔：老师曾对艾玛说过真正的科学家如何应对失

败以及创新来自于适应和坚持的能力。

回应：在困境中，艾玛想起老师的话，以此

激励自己重新开始，将老师的教导转化为实

际行动，最终获得成功，体现了老师话语对

她的深刻影响。

4. 伏笔：艾玛的父母经常看到她在电脑前工作，周围

堆满书籍和实验设备，表明她的努力和专注。

回应：在重新准备项目的过程中，这种专注

和努力再次体现，她更加投入地工作，不放

过任何细节，最终取得好成绩，也让父母为

她感到骄傲。

5. 伏笔：艾玛去维修店被告知数据恢复至少需一周且

不确定能否成功，凸显她所面临的困境。

回应：这促使她不得不另寻出路，依靠自己

的能力重新开始，从而推动了故事的发展，

让她在困境中成长和蜕变。

续写要点：

第一段：详细描述艾玛重新开始后的具体行动，如

重新设计实验步骤、如何更精准地收集数据、向哪

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