《备战2023年高考英语一轮复习考点帮(新高考专用)》考点44 读后续写09 生活类(亲情、友情、趣事篇)(原卷版)

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考点 44 读后续写 09 生活
类(亲情、友情、趣事
篇)(原卷版)
【命题解读】
生活类故事的核心就是体验生活,体验感情:友情,亲情,人与动物之情等。
【思维导图】
友情和亲情
【核心技巧
1 :矛盾塑造(尴尬 + 紧张)
1. So nervous was he that (他he dropped the electric carving knife.2021.04
州高三调考)
2. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my
head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. 2021 1月浙江高考)
3. Sweating and nearly tearing(汗流浃背,眼泪差点流下来), I could imagine how silly and
strange I was at that moment based on the continuing laughter from my parents and Jason. 2021
1月浙江高考)
3. 她立刻涨红了脸,感到尴尬几乎把她整个包围起来。
Blushing scarlet instantly, she felt embarrassment almost wreathed her entirely.
【核心技巧
2 :快乐结局塑造(感激 + 开心)
1. 他们耸了耸肩,咧着嘴笑,这就驱散了她的一切烦恼,给了她安慰。
They shrugged and grinned, which dissipated all her distress and consoled her.
1. 谢谢。她紧紧抓住打开的袋子,充满了感激和温暖。
‘Thanks.’ Clinging her hands to the bag opening, she was overwhelmed by a surge of gratitude
and warmth.
2. 这两个强壮的陌生人点亮了她的一天。
The two strong strangers undoubtedly lit her day up.
3. We all jumped to our feet, dancing and screaming with joy开心得欢呼雀跃). 2021.04
州高三调考)
4. Though I was dissatisfied with my ugly gesture and stupid image, I was satisfied with the
happiness and fun that I brought to others(对我带给别人的快乐和乐趣感到满意). 2021
1月浙江高考)
5. 她停了下来,心中洋溢着欢快的心情,拿出一把硬币,扭头把它们攥在他们的手里,尽
管两个男人的表情都很惊讶。(2021 嘉兴二模)
Brimming over with bright feeling and joy, she stopped, fished out a handful coins and tuned
around to squeeze them in their fists despite two men's astonished expression.
人与动物
从历年高考的读后续写话题中可以看出人和动物的话题备受命题者青睐。试题文本
般从两个角度展开,一个就是人和动物和谐相处, 要么是人类帮助动物解决问题,要么是动
物帮助人类解决问题;另外一个就是,人类与动物产生冲突,尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物
遇到危险,首先沉着冷静与动物周旋,后来向别人求助,之后成功脱险的故事。例如:
狼大战:骑车旅途遭遇狼 wolf 赶,脱险经历2017 6浙江高考);人熊大战:北
探险者给北极熊拍照,遭遇 polar bear 追赶的惊险经历(2020 6 月浙江高考);人狗和
谐:父母决定Poppy 买一条小狗作伴,帮助 Poppy 脱孤独和想念的故事(2020 1
浙江高考);人猫和谐:作者的丈夫从讨厌猫到向猫求助,赶走土拨鼠的故事2021 3
月临沂市一模)。
【可爱型动物故事情节
可爱型动物,如狗,鸟等,主要构思助动物生命,动物(主要是
狗)人的生命等故事情节。
1. They were glad to see Poppy coming back to her usual self(他们很高兴看到 Poppy 又回到以
前 的自 己, guiding the little dog on daily walks and even introducing to it her favorite toys.
2020 1月高考浙江卷)
2. Smiling ever so bright(笑得更加灿烂。), he called out to his parents, who tugged him in for
a long hug. 2020 1月高考浙江卷)
3. Her parents watched them playing around and smiled with relief笑了Poppy was
back to her old cheerful self!2020 1月高考浙江卷)
猛型动物故事情节
猛的动物,如狼、熊等,一人造成生以主要是以遇险、脱险的故
事情节主。
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