专题06 读后续写（第01期）-2023届江苏高考模拟试题分项汇编（教师版）

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专题 06 读后续写（第 01 期）-2023 届江苏高考模拟试题分项汇编

【江苏省百校联考 2022-2023 学年高三上学期第一次考试】

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I’m from the fishing town of Kinsale, in Ireland. Life is pretty good there, but Dubai caught my attention when I was

18. I moved there myself 10 years ago as a 30-year-old film-maker. It’s been a wild ride, full of chaos and wonder.

My wife, Christine, lives here with me; when her sister Angela came to visit in April this year, the three of us set off in

my pickup truck. It was a cloudless day, touching 40 ℃. The heat and humidity were violent, so we had to sightsee from the

car.

We took the scenic route between Dubai and Ras al-Khaimah, a charming city in the north. A year earlier, while off-

roading with a friend, I got stuck at a water crossing there, at the only inlet on the coast, where the sea flows into a swampy

lagoon (咸水湖). I had to be rescued, and learned how quickly the tide (潮水) could come in.

Christine spotted what looked like the Loch Ness monster stuck in the sand. We decided to investigate and drove up to

where the sand met the lagoon. It was a camel, not moving.

Since relocating here, I have always kept a shovel, rope, torches and knives in my car—getting stuck in the desert can

be debilitating (耗费体力的).

I got out my shovel and approached the camel. It was a female; we nicknamed her Stucky. It looked as if she had been

trapped for hours—she was in quite deep. I’ve been around camels a lot in Dubai; they are massive. They can be friendly,

but they can also be fierce. I approached Stucky slowly and started to gently dig away the sand around her. I kept patting

her. I knew if she swung her head around quickly, she could injure herself, or me.

注意：

1.续写词数应为 150 左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Christine filmed my rescue attempt and posted photos on social media.

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Luckily, at that point, a pickup arrived carrying 7 guys with all sorts of apparatus(装备).

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【答案】Christine filmed my rescue attempt and posted photos on social media. Angela gave Stucky water. I focused on

digging out her back legs. When I tried to wipe the sweat from my eyes, I would get sand in them. An hour later, we still

weren’t making much progress—whenever we nearly freed a leg, which took about 20 minutes, she would get sucked back

into the sand. And the more she struggled to get free, the more stuck she became. We were worried it would get dark and the

tide would come in.

Luckily, at that point, a pickup arrived carrying 7 guys with all sorts of apparatus (装备). Someone saw posted photos

of the camel rescue on social media. Word then quickly spread to the small farms a few kilometres away. They joined in and

worked super-hard. Everyone was working on all four of the camel’s legs at the same time, using different techniques.

When we finally got her out, Stucky’s legs were effectively dead. Then the guys massaged her legs to get the blood flowing.

It took about 20 minutes for her to stand. Then she turned, stretched and gave us a wink goodbye.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和妻子以及妻子的姐姐一起在迪拜旅行，旅行途中遇到一只骆驼被

困在沙滩中，作者奋力救助这只骆驼，但由于骆驼太大，作者耗费了很长时间也没能救出骆驼，作者的妻子把这

件事发布到社交媒体上，引来几公里外小农场里的人来帮忙，最终救出被困的骆驼。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“克里斯汀拍下了我的营救过程并在社交媒体上发布了照片。”可知，第一段可描写作者营

救骆驼的过程。

②由第二段首句内容“幸运的是，就在这时，一辆皮卡来了，载着 7个人和各种各样的设备。”可知，第二段可

描写来人帮忙，和作者共同营救骆驼，最终成功救出骆驼。

2.续写线索：发布在社交媒体上——作者费力营救——没能成功——来人帮忙——成功救出骆驼

3.词汇激活

行为类

①关注：focus on/pay attention to

.②加入：join in/take part in

.③花费：take/cost

情绪类

.①担心的：be worried/be concerned

.②麻木的：dead / numb

【点睛】[高分句型 1]. An hour later, we still weren’t making much progress—whenever we nearly freed a leg, which took

about 20 minutes, she would get sucked back into the sand.（由 which 引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型 2]. When we finally got her out, Stucky’s legs were effectively dead. （由 when 引导的时间状语从句）

【江苏省镇江市 2022-2023 学年高三上学期期初】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构

成一篇完整的短文。

I had never noticed her. She was not the kind of girl who could draw attention. She was not tall and just plain. In class,

she liked sitting at the back, reading or taking notes. It was once I asked her to read aloud the text that I looked at her with

new eyes when I heard her standard American pronunciation. Later on, the National College English Speech Contest would

be held. I thought it over and filled in her name with a smile. I red-penciled her draft of speech, corrected her pronunciation,

and even adjusted her body language.

However, I was always kind of worried because she was too introvert(内向的)and too quiet. Could she seize this rare

opportunity?

On the night of the contest, I told her to take it easy. Blushed(脸红的), she looked at me and said nothing.

My heart sank. It seemed that she did tense up. I pated her and let her go to draw lots(抽签). As a result, what she drew

was No. 9 while No. 8 was recognized English master-hand(高手).

Sure enough, the English master-hand was fairly successful in the speech with his humor and highly personal style.

The whole audience would make a warm applause almost every 30 seconds until she appeared on the stage, still talking

over his speech with excitement.

My palms began to sweat. I sat there, with no courage to look at her. It was the first time that she went up the stage, so

I couldn't blame her for any slips. But at that moment, I found I was so scared of her failure.

The strong spotlight made her so small and so insignificant that nobody seemed to notice she had been on the stage, I

said to myself, no hope.

But the moment that shocked me occurred. I clearly heard a voice, a very loud voice, “Now, please focus on me.” She

said this sentence three times in all, louder and louder.

注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 词左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

The whole audience fell silent.

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After her speech ended for a long while, a thunderous applause sounded in the whole audience.

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【答案】òòòòòòòThe whole audience fell silent. Small and thin as the girl appeared, the determined look on her

face instantly caught everyone’s eyes. She glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began her speech. Everything

went smoothly－her voice was clear and influential and her speech was logical and well-organized. Words of power and

grace flowed freely out of the girl like magic. She was usually soft-voiced and rarely drew attention in public before. It was

like something in a dream!

After her speech ended for a long while, a thunderous applause sounded in the whole audience. When the competition

was drawing to a close, still immersed in her stunning performance, all of us waited nervously for the winner’s name to be

called. Tears of joy blurred my vision the moment the host announced that she won the first prize. Holding the trophy

tightly, she gave me a brilliant smile. “You surely made yourself the most shining focus tonight!” I exclaimed, cheerfully

pulling her into my arms. Yes, sometimes a tremendous energy originates from the silent accumulation.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者挑选班里一个口语标准但是性格内向的女孩参加全国英语演讲比赛。

比赛的当天，作者现场督战，当看到对手强大，并赢得观众的阵阵掌声时，对自己的学生缺乏信心。然而，事实

证明，这个看上去文静，内向怯弱的女孩却以惊人的气魄赢得了观众的支持，取得了成功。即沉默着发威的故事。

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“全场鸦雀无声。”可知，第一段可描写女孩在赛场上的表现，令人惊讶。描写的内容可以

包括女孩的演讲语速、声音等等以及赛场外观众的反应。

②由第二段首句内容“她的演讲结束了好一会儿，全场响起了雷鸣般的掌声。”可知，第二段可描写女孩演讲后，

观众们对女孩精彩表现的积极反应。同时可以描述女孩的获奖的心情以及作者的情绪反应。最后阐述通过该经历

作者收获的宝贵经验。

2.续写线索：现场比赛——鸦雀无声——精彩表现——热烈反响——登台领奖——最终感悟

3.词汇激活行为类

.①吸引目光：catch one’s eyes/draw one’s attention

.②接近尾声：draw to a close/come to an end

.③模糊视线：òblur one’s vision /be vague

情绪类

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