专题06 读后续写（第4期）-2023届江苏高考模拟试题分项汇编（教师版）

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专题 06 读后续写（第 4期）-2023 届江苏高考模拟试题分项汇编

【江苏省常熟市 2022-2023 学年高三 10 月阶段性抽测（一）】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写

两段，使其构成一篇完整的短文。

Having worked at a small food store for two years, I thought I had become successful at what our manager called

“customer relations”. I firmly believed that a friendly smile and an automatic “sir”, “madam”, “thank you” and “sorry”

would see me through any situation. But on a Christmas night an old woman shook my belief that such a glib response (巧

言应对) could smooth over any difficulty while dealing with other human beings.

The moment she entered the store, the woman presented a sharp contrast to our shiny store with its bright lighting and

neatly arranged shelves. Walking as if each step were painful, she slowly pushed open the glass door. On such a zero-degree

night, she was wearing only a faded print dress, a thin sweater too small to button, and black slippers with the backs cut out

to expose heels. There were no stockings or socks on her blue-veined legs.

After walking around the store for several minutes, the old woman stopped in front of the rows of canned vegetables.

She looked at the row of cans, finally picked up a can of corn and stared at the label. At that point, I decided to be a good

and polite employee and asked her if she needed help. As I stood close to her, my smile became harder to maintain. An

unpleasant smell of sweat rose from her torn clothing.

“I need some food,” she muttered in reply to my bright “Madam, can I help you?”

“Are you looking for corn, madam?”

“I need some food,” she repeated, looking down at the can in her hand, “Any kind.”

“Well, the can of corn is ninety-five cents, madam.” I said in my most helpful voice. “Or if you like, we have a special

on bread today.”

After a short pause, she lifted her head and said, “But I can’t pay.”

For a second, it was on the tip of my tongue to tell her that she could take the corn.

注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好

Paragraph1：

Then the employee rules flooded into my mind: remain polite but do not let the customers get the best of you.

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Paragraph 2：

Moments after she left, I rushed out of the door with the can of corn.

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【答案】Possible version 1:

Then the employee rules flooded into my mind: remain polite but do not let the customers get the best of you. At the

thought of that, I managed a friendly smile and automatically blurted out, “I’m sorry, madam, but I can’t give away

anything for free.” Hearing this, the old woman nodded her head, her face darkened and eyelids dropped. Unwillingly, she

put the can back on the shelf, shuffled past me toward the door and vanished into the distance. It was at that moment that a

ripple of regret welled up inside me. How I wished I hadn’t said those words! (81 words)

Moments after she left, I rushed out of the door with the can of corn. Fortunately, the gaunt figure of the old woman

was still in sight, so I went running up to her. “Madam, Merry Christmas!” said I, thrusting the can of corn into her hand.

For a second, I could feel that her hand quivered. Without waiting for her reply, I just waved her goodbye before trotting

straight away. For the rest of my shift, the image of the woman constantly reminded me that while dealing with other human

beings, it was sincere concern rather than a glib response that could smooth over any difficulty. (92 words)

Possible version 2:

Then the employee rules flooded into my mind: remain polite, but do not let customers get the best of you. For a

moment, I even entertained the idea that this was some sort of test, and that this woman was someone from the head office,

testing my loyalty. I responded dutifully, “I’m sorry, madam, but I can’t give away anything for free.” The old woman’s face

collapsed a bit more and her hands trembled as she put the can back on the shelf. She shuffled past me toward the door, her

torn and dirty clothing barely covering her bent back. (80 words)

Moments after she left, I rushed out the door with the can of corn. But she was nowhere in sight. While I was dragging

myself back, what kept me company was merely biting wind. For the rest of my shift, the image of the woman haunted me.

I was so young, healthy and smug while she was so old, sick and desperate. Wishing with all my heart that I had acted like a

human being rather than so merciless an employee, I was saddened to realize when facing dilemmas how difficult it was for

a heart to stay gold. (85 words)

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一家小食品店工作了两年之后，在一个圣诞夜，一位老妇人动摇

了作者的信念，让作者不相信这种油嘴滑舌的回应可以解决与他人打交道时的任何困难。

1.段落续写

① 由第一段首句内容“然后，我的脑海中浮现出了员工守则：保持礼貌，但不要让顾客占你的便宜。”可知，第

一段描写作者按照员工守则，拒绝提供免费的食物，老妇人失望地离开了，而作者感到了后悔。

② 由第二段首句内容“她走后不久，我拿着玉米罐冲出了门。”可知，第二段可描写作者给老妇人送去玉米罐头，

她很感激，而作者也感悟了在与他人打交道时，应是真诚的关心，而不是能化解任何困难的油嘴滑舌的回应。

2.续写线索：拒绝老妇人—后悔—追上老妇人—老妇人感激—获得感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

变黑：darken/blacken/dim

消失：vanish/disappear

追上：run up to/catch up with

猛塞：thrust/plug

情绪类

不情愿地：unwillingly/reluctantly/grudgingly

后悔：regret/repentance

【点睛】[高分句型 1] It was at that moment that a ripple of regret welled up inside me. (强调句型)

[高分句型 2] For the rest of my shift, the image of the woman constantly reminded me that while dealing with other human

beings, it was sincere concern rather than a glib response that could smooth over any difficulty. (that 引导的宾语从句和强

调句型)

【江苏省淮安中学 2022-2023 学年高三 1部上学期期初联考模拟测试】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头

语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

“Go back, Mom! Go back!” shouted my six-year-old daughter, June. I quickly turned around to cast my doubtful eyes

on the back seat, worried I had forgotten her younger sister. I was relieved to see the girls safe and sit in their car seats, but

June’s expression was one of pure anxiety. “Mom, we have to go back,” she insisted. “Someone needs our help!”

As I looked back from the driver’s seat, I spotted a young man in rags playing his guitar. His skinny, poor-looking dog

rested next to his feet near an old, worn cardboard sign that read, “Homeless, please help.”

We’d come across homeless people before and had talked about their needs and struggles. I should seize the chance to

set a good example for my daughters to give a helping hand. So I searched for some cash, only to find I had nothing but

credit cards. “I’m sorry, sweetheart, but I don’t have any cash,” I said. “I have some, Mom!” June replied. She opened her

little pink purse and pulled out a five-dollar bill. “Oh, good. I’ll pay you back when we get home,” I responded with a sigh

of relief. “No. Mom.” she insisted, “I want to help him. I don’t want you to pay me back. I want to give him my money.”

As we drove down the crowded rows of the parking lot, I reassured her that we would get to him.

When we got there. I called out, “Excuse me, sir!” He cautiously walked toward our car and answered, “Yes, ma’am?”

“Here you go, sir.” June stretched out her entire body to hand him her five-dollar bill through the window and explained, “I

want you to have this.” He smiled and hesitatingly asked, “This was your money?” “Yes! I want you to have it,” she proudly

answered. “Thank you,” he said, touched by her thoughtfulness.

We exchanged a smile, and as we drove away, my younger daughter Scarlett began to cry. I hadn’t noticed that she had

emptied her purse and was holding two quarters in her tiny hands.

注意：

1.续写词数应为 150 左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1:

“Mom, I wanted to help, too,” she sobbed.

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Paragraph 2:

Now with tears in his eyes, he said in disbelief, “You want to help me?”

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【答案】øøøøø

“

Mom, I wanted to help, too,” she sobbed. I sighed and drove back to where we saw the man. But

what could be found was only the guitar leaning against the wall. After 20 minutes’ search, outside a KFC, we spotted the

man talking to an old granny with a walking stick. We were so happy that we ran towards him, “ So you are here. I’m

looking for you.” said Scarlett.

Now with tears in his eyes, he said in disbelief, “You want to help me?” She said, “Yes, I want to help you as my

elder sister did, but I couldn’t find you.” “The old granny wanted to buy food in the KFC, but she had difficulty in walking.

So I helped her.” he said. Scarlett said , “You’re so kind. Here is the money that I want to give you.” The man accepted it

and said with appreciation, “Thank you. Hope you have a good day.” Then we waved him goodbye and left for home.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者带两个女儿准备开车回家时，六岁的女儿琼看到一个无家可归的年

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