专题06 读后续写（第06期）-2023届江苏高考英语模拟试题分项汇编（教师版）

专题 06 读后续写（第 06 期）-2023 届江苏高考英语模拟试题分项汇编

【江苏省南京外国语学校 2022-2023 学年高三上学期期中】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语

续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

“I wish my mother had a ring like those the ladies wear at the hotel,” said Hiram Green to himself one day.

Hiram was the son of a fisherman, but the fisherman had died when Hiram was a little boy. Hiram’s mother took on

sewing work to earn money to support herself and her son. He helped her when he could re out of school hours, and

during vacation time. He had two uncles who had taught him how to catch shrimps. With the money he earned by

selling them he could buy things for his own use or pleasure. He had a “bank” almost full of what he called his

“shrimp money.”

The sight of the flashing diamonds on the hands of some of the summer visitors at the fishing village in which

he lived had added a new article to the list of beautiful things his mother would own someday. He had heard that

just one single diamond was sometimes worth five hundred dollars or more. This had discouraged him very much.

But one day, he happened to pass a shop in the neighboring town and saw a number of diamond rings

displayed in the window. He stopped fascinated, and pressed his face against the glass eagerly to see if any prices

were marked upon them. Imagine his surprise when he saw upon the largest one a tag marked $4.75. He looked

again to see if he had made a mistake. Perhaps it was $475. But no, he knew enough about figures to see that he

was right the first time.

He went home as fast as he could, and ran up into his bedroom. Then, he opened his “bank” and counted its

contents. “Three dollars and twenty-two cents!” he cried. “I’ll have that ring before another week.” Hiram worked

early and late for the next few days. He caught more shrimps than he had ever caught in the same length of time,

and sold them readily.

注意:

1.续写词数应为 150 左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

At the end of the week he had the sum he desired.

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Years after, Hiram learned what he had bought was in fact only glass, and he decided to tell his mother.

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【答案】 At the end of the week he had the sum he desired. Hurrying to the shop where he had seen the ring,

before going inside he gave one swift, almost frightened look into the window. Could it be gone? No, there it was

flashing and shining as before. That evening, he placed it on his mother’s finger. She looked at it in surprise. “It is

yours, Mother,” he cried, proudly. “I bought it with my shrimp money.” “My dear boy,” said his mother, while

something as bright as the shining stone flashed in her eyes, “not one of those ladies can value their rings as I shall

value mine.”

Years afterwards Hiram learned that what he had thought was a diamond was only a bit of glass. “Did you

know it then, Mother?” he asked. His mother nodded. “And you never told me.” “It was brighter to me than any

real diamond,” she said. “The brightness I saw flashing in it was the unselfish love of my boy.” Indeed, nothing in

the world is more precious than a sincere heart.

【导语】本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了小男孩 Hiram Green 想要给母亲买一个钻石戒指，但是这太贵了。

有一天他突然发现在一家店里的一个钻石戒指只要 4.75 美元。他很激动，在一周后攒够了钱，买下了戒指

送给母亲。母亲很珍惜。多年以后他才知道那只是一个玻璃，但母亲说这世上没有比这更珍贵的了。

1.段落续写：

.① 由第一段首句内容“到周末，他得到了他想要的那笔钱。”可知，第一段可描写 Hiram Green 去买下了

那个戒指送给了母亲。

.② 由第二段首句内容“多年以后，Hiram 才知道他原来以为是钻石的东西其实只是一小块玻璃。”可知，

第二段可描写 Hiram 询问母亲是否知道，母亲说虽然是玻璃，但这世上没有比这更珍贵的了。

2.续写线索：买戒指——送戒指——惊喜——真相——珍惜

3.词汇激活

行为类

① 放置：place/put

② 闪耀：flash/twinkle

③ 珍惜：value/cherish

情绪类

① 惊喜：surprise/amazement

② 真诚的：sincere/frank

【点睛】[高分句型 1] Hurrying to the shop where he had seen the ring, before going inside he gave one swift,

almost frightened look into the window. (运用了现在分词作状语和 where 引导的定语从句)

[高分句型 2] The brightness I saw flashing in it was the unselfish love of my boy. (运用了省略关系代词的定语

从句和现在分词作后置定语)

【江苏省淮安市高中校协作体 2022-2023 学年高三上学期期中】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开

头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

“What a crabby-looking lady (怨妇),” the cashier at my local convenience store whispered to her coworker. I

was grabbing something off the shelf. I had a half dozen kids waiting for me outside in the van, and here’s the

thing: they were all my own children. No time for polite. No casual conversation with the checkout lady, no nod of

approval toward the stock boy, no breathing. Just get the toilet paper, two gallons of milk and some Frosted Flakes

and get back to my children!

But my interest was aroused by the crabby-looking lady. Which one was she? Taking a family pack of toilet

paper under my arm, I scanned the tiny store for the crabby lady. Let’s see, there’s a middle-aged guy checking on

pork, an older gentleman at the checkout purchasing an egg salad sandwich and a coffee, and... just then I saw her,

the crabby-looking lady.

Her eyes were small; her brown hair was pulled back in a ponytail so tight that it looked like her forehead

would drop. Her mouth was shut serious. This lady looked like she had smelled something really bad. Then, I

turned away from my own reflection in the convex security mirror (安全反射镜) at the back of the store. The

crabby-looking lady... was me!

That night, I cried. I was the crabby-looking lady! Me! The girl once voted nicest smile by her high school

class! Things must get changed! Right then and there I resolved to do one thing over the next year. One simple

resolution: to smile. I didn’t need to wait for January 1st — I would start right now.

I resolved to smile at anyone and anything, even though they would let me down. And I also resolved to make

a conscious effort to smile, at least ten times a day.

专题06 读后续写（第06期）-2023届江苏高考英语模拟试题分项汇编（教师版）

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