专题06 读后续写（第02期）-2023届江苏高考模拟试题分项汇编（教师版）

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专题 06 读后续写（第 01 期）-2023 届江苏高考模拟试题分项汇编

【江苏省南京市 2022-2023 学年高三上学期期初考试】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使

之构成一篇完整的短文。

My teenage son, Jordan, always complained about having to be home earlier than all his friends. He would tell me that

he was already seventeen, but still had a curfew (宵禁). He believed he was practically an adult. I pointed out that he was

not an adult as he was still in high school.

“You don’t trust me!” he yelled. Before I continued, he rolled his eyes, slammed the door and walked away. I sighed.

How could I make Jordan see that I only wanted to keep him safe?

I decided to go for a walk, hoping the December air would clear my head. I opened the front door and nearly stepped

on her: a small black cat, just like a meatball. “Hi, Meatball,” I said, bringing her into my arms. I walked back in, touching

her neck gently. Meatball seemed happy enough to come in the house, but after an hour or two, she sat by the door,

meowing to go back outside.

“Why won’t she just stay in with us all the time?” Nathan, my youngest son asked.

I explained to him that she was happy here but she liked being able to come and go as she pleased.

“That must be nice,” Jordan muttered from the other room, complaining why the cat, not him, could come and go. He

even asked me to give Meatball a curfew.

Meatball became a regular.

One night, temperatures were unusually low. Meatball stood at the door, meowing to go outside.

I shook my head at her, afraid that she might freeze to death. She stared at me and meowed again. I patted her head, “I

know you’re not happy, but it’s for your own good.”

“Mom’s not being mean to you,” Nathan told the cat. “She’s just trying to keep you from turning into a frozen

meatball.” We both laughed at his joke.

The next morning, I couldn’t find Meatball. I asked the kids if anyone had seen her.

注意：

1.续写词数应为 150 左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Jordan nodded, “I let her out last night.”

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As I drove to the animal hospital, Jordan sat in the back, holding Meatball inside his coat.

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【答案】ZZZZZJordan nodded, “I let her out last night.” My mouth dropped open. “She was outside all night?” I

was so furious, “It was freezing and she could die!” Jordan choked back his words, stunned. I grabbed my coat and rushed

outside. Jordan followed, fear welling up in his eyes. Several minutes later, the poor thing was found, shaking and curling

into a tiny ball. I picked her up, unsure whether she was alive or dead. Jordan was scared, “We need a vet! Now!”

As I drove to the animal hospital, Jordan sat in the back, holding Meatball inside his coat. I could hear him talking to

the cat, apologizing repeatedly. Luckily, the vet saved Meatball. Seeing her eyes open, Jordan stroked her head, all tears.

Then, surprisingly, he turned to me. He apologized for what he had done. “I know you just want to keep me safe,” he

murmured. I felt a lump in my throat. He rubbed Meatball’s back, “Looks like we are both going to observe the curfew. It’s

for our own good.”

【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者的儿子抱怨作者不让他晚上外出，但是在通过猫被夜里放出而差点被

冻死的事情后，他儿子终于明白作者不让他出去是为了他的安全着想。

1.段落续写：

①.由第一段首句内容：乔丹点点头，“我昨晚放她出来的。”可知，第一段可描写猫被放出去后他们去寻找的过

程以及猫被找到后的状态。

②.由第二段首句内容：“当我开车去动物医院的时候，乔丹坐在后面，把肉球放在外套里。”可知，第二段可描

写他们将猫送去救治的过程以及乔丹的懊悔。

2.续写线索：去找猫——发现猫——发现猫状态不对——送去救治——猫得救——乔丹懊悔

3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）

行为类

①.抓住：grab/grasp

②.轻抚：stroke/ pet

③.拯救：save/ rescue

情绪类

①.非常愤怒： so furious / so angry

②.恐惧的：scared/ terrified

【点睛】[高分句型 1] As I drove to the animal hospital, Jordan sat in the back, holding Meatball inside his coat.（运用了

as 引导的时间状语从句）

[高分句型 2]. Seeing her eyes open, Jordan stroked her head, all tears.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）

【江苏省常州市第一中学 2022-2023 学年高三上学期期初检测】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成

一个完整的故事。

It was our turn to open our presents this particular Christmas morning. The living room was already covered with torn

wrapping paper. Obviously, the children could hardly wait to discover the hidden treasures, which they had expected for

nearly a month. Now we adults sat around the room with our presents at our feet, slowly removing the paper, trying to

maintain our dignity in front of the children.

My wife, Brenda, and her family have a tradition of getting each other gag (恶作剧) gifts. This always makes me a bit

uneasy at Christmas or my birthday, never knowing what form of embarrassment lies waiting for me under the thin borders

of the wrapping paper.

Recently, my six-year-old daughter Christy seemed to busy herself with something while I was playing computer video

flight games. Now she was standing directly in front of me. The excitement of the moment just beamed across her face. It

was everything she could do to keep herself from helping me rip the paper from each present. Finally, I came to the last gift

and with my natural Sherlock Holmes ability, I concluded that this had to be the gag gift. With everyone looking on, I

decided to go ahead and get it over with—just let them have their laugh—and I tore the paper and there it was a toy airplane

about two inches long. Our holiday guests started giggling to themselves as I looked up to my wife with an unpleasant smile

on my face and blurted out (脱口而出), “A toy airplane? Are you kidding me?”

Brenda gave me the look—that look that always tells me I have just said something wrong and should have given it a

second thought. I had failed to look at the name tag before I opened the present to see who it was from. As I picked up the

paper from the floor and read the name tag, my heart sank.

注意：

1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

On the tag were the letters that read, “To Dad, Love Christy”.

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Staring at the gift, I suddenly thought of a way to cheer her up.

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【答案】

ZZZZZZZZ

On the tag were the letters that read, “To Dad, Love Christy”. Seeing her joy replaced by a

look of total embarrassment and humiliation, I was seized by a strong sense of regret and pain. She slowly lowered her head

down, seemingly praying that nobody would discover whom the gift came from. Without hesitation, I knelt down and

embraced Christy tightly, trying to take back those words. I explained I had thought it was from Mom, but since it came

from her, that made it different. However, no matter what I said , it could hardly remove the disappointment in her eyes and

hurt in her heart. Confronted with the embarrassing situation, I was at a loss what to do.

Staring at the gift, I suddenly thought of a way to lift her up. I took that toy airplane in my hand, turned on its switch

and flew the plane. At the sight of the flying plane, I yelled with excitement, which amused other children who eagerly

asked for a try. My eyes resting on Christy, I deliberately ignored their enthusiasm, flying the plane around her. “Let me try

it first!”. It wasn’t long before Christy believed it was really a charming gift and grabbed for the plane, a big smile radiating

from her lightened face. From then on, I kept the little plane as a reminder of my girl’s love and also, the power of words.

【分析】本文主要讲述了在一个圣诞节的早晨，我正准备拆开家人送我的礼物，但妻子和她的家人有一个送恶作

剧礼物的传统，这让我很不安。当剩下最后一份礼物时，我的直觉告诉我这就是那份恶作剧礼物，拆开礼物后，

里面是一个两英寸长的玩具飞机，看着客人们咯咯地笑起来，我很不愉快，认定这是那份恶作剧礼物，并脱口而

出“玩具飞机？你在开玩笑吗？”，但在妻子的提示下，我看到礼物上的标签时，我的心沉了下去。

1.段落续写：

① 由第一段首句内容“标签上是写着“给爸爸，爱你的克里斯蒂”。”可知，第一段可描写当作者得知礼物是女

儿送的后的举动和女儿听到爸爸的话后失望的心情。

② 由第二段首句内容“盯着礼物，我突然想到一个办法让她高兴起来。”可知，第二段可描写作者是用什么方法

让女儿高兴起来的及通过这件事作者的感悟。

2.续写线索：女儿失望——作者向女儿解释——女儿仍然难过——作者想出新办法——女儿高兴起来——作者的感

悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①.低下头：lower one’s head down /bow one’s head

②.拥抱：embrace/hug

③.不知所措：be at a loss what to do/ be at one’s wits’ end

情绪类

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