2021届高考英语作文：读后续写高分技巧和4篇练习题(附范文)

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2021 届高考英语作文：读后续写高分技巧和 4篇练习题(附范文)
一、什么是读后续写
读后续写从浙江省开始试点，到去年开始，山东新高考也增加了读后续写这个题型。
它要求考生在理解一片不完整文章的基础上，格局要求和提示来预测缺失部分的内容
走势，将文章补充完整，使之浑然一体。
二、读后续写两大写作手法和应用
1）两种写作手法：“叙述”“、描写”
1、叙述的功能主要是推动国庆节的发展。
2、描写力求通过呈现细节强调任务的性格特点。
精彩的描写往往更容易提高文章的可读性，给阅卷老师留下深刻的印象。
所以考生若是在续写文章时，若想获取高分，就要学会将这两种写作手法结合起来使
用。
2）如何应用这两大手法
下面通过一个例子来清楚地展示同一个场景，两种不同的叙述方式，大家看看哪一种
更能获得阅卷老师的好感呢？
1. She pushed the door open and saw her mother sitting in the room sadly.
2. Opening the door slowly and carefully, she caught sight of her mother, who sat
motionlessly with her eyes staring blankly into space and tears rolling down her cheeks.
以上两句话描绘的是同一个场景：女儿推开房门发现母亲伤心地坐在房间里。
句1主要采用了叙述的方式，虽然交代清楚了场景和事件，语言上也没有错误，但是
句子显得平淡无味，属于基本合格的句子。
而在句 2中，作者具体地描写了母亲茫然地盯着前方，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来的样子，
虽然没有出现 sad 一词，但是通过这些细节读者很容易感受到母亲当时的心情。
细细品味高下立判。
三、读后续写高分技巧
把握核心，优化用词，表达方式务求丰富。
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写作的基础是要有一定量的词汇的积累，所以准备迎接高考的每个学生必须要在尽量
短的时间内完成写作常用好的词汇积累。
只有词汇丰富了，在写作的时候才能做到游刃有余，心中的画面才能尽量生动地呈现
出来。
下面陆续从几个方面来解析如何进行生动地描述，以及选用何种类型符合要求的词汇
和表达方式。
1）如何进行动作的描写：
1、哭：
He wept bitterly when it was time for us to leave. He could feel tears springing up behind his
eyes but he was determined that he wouldn't allow them to appear. He stood silently, tears
rolling/running/streaming down his cheeks/face, while the music was playing.
2、看：
He looked around the room without fully lifting his eyes up from the ground. As I picked a
glance/look at the performer, I was astonished to see Jack. My father winkled his brow and
gazed at me, confused and worried.
3、走：
She wandered aimlessly around the streets. As he slowly inched his way toward the
crossroads, he finally saw the car accident that was blocking traffic.
4、笑：
I squeezed a smile trying to conceal my nervousness. It was such a good comedy that when it
finished, he was still rowing with laughter.
5、坐：
He settled himself comfortably in his usual chair. She popped up to a sitting position and
looked hastily around.
2）如何进行心理描写
1、开心
A slow smile worked its way across his face and into his eyes. All the people present were
enveloped in an atmosphere of joy.
Children were filled with excitement at the thought of visiting Disneyland.
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2、难过
Tears welled up in her eyes and began rolling down her cheeks.
Moved by the words, Jack couldn‘t help but burst into tears, feeling guilty about not visiting
him more often.
I sank my head in my hands and sobbed bitterly, tasting the salt from the tears that streamed
down my face.
3、惊讶
The sudden explosion made her jump out of her skin. His sight was glued to what he had
seen, and his eyeballs were likely to fall down.
He tried to grab something to lean against, for he was too astonished to stand still.
When he first saw their new house, Bruno's eyes opened wide and his mouth made the shape
of an O.
4、紧张
He laughed to cover/hide/conceal his nervousness.
She exhibited slight nervousness as she read the text.
His heart racing, and tears filling his eyes, Jack carefully unlocked the box.
5、期待
They waited anxiously, in expectation of the arrival of the new-born baby.
Tom asked, narrowing his eyes and looking at me curiously.
6、愤怒
The boss exploded with anger when he saw the sales report.
The old man was boiling over with rage at finding himself ignored.
Rage and hate flowed into her and stiffened her spine.
3）如何使环境氛围变成“高颜值”
1、阳光
The setting sun cast an orange glow over the mountains.
With the sunlight flooding/streaming into the room, she was bathed in the warmth.
Bathed in the golden sunlight, the lake was shining charmingly as the breeze gently left the
ripples when it passed by.
2、酷热
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