专题06 读后续写速成：“五点爆破”法-攻克2021年高考英语读后续写技巧与训练（新高考地区专用）

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读后续写速成:“五点爆破”法

五步写作法流程示例

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the

forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they

reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and

walked away.

With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she

turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped

mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.

“Tom!” she cried. “Help!”

No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she

walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the

night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and

tell him how much she loved him.

Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance.

Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a

few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the

stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.

As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the

trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead.

Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.

But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _________________________________

It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _________________________________________

STEP1 落点：浏览所给信息,确定大意主题

who Jane,Tom

what Jane was lost

where In a forest

when One weekend in July

why A quarrel with Tom,her husband

文章大意 Jane was lost in the forest for three days and survived in the end

表达主题 Jane learned how to control emotions and deal with conflicts

STEP2 重点：梳理已知段落,确定主要情节

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