导学案——读后续写“如鲠在喉”,如何“一吐为快”续写精彩故事——参考答案

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读后续写“如鲠在喉”如何“一吐为快”续写精彩故事答
Task 1 答案
Characters---Sheldon, Mom, Dad Gorge, Brother Gorgie, twin sister Misey
Setting---When? Monday morning
---Where?Sheldon's house
Plot---(提取故事情节的动作链)--- urge --- hurry --- choke--- panicked--- smack
Emotional changes(情感变化) ---frightened--- panicked
后续动作链——Smack(拍)---shake --- call 911 ---Heimlich ---breathe---go to school---explain
后续情感变化——frightened--- panicked---worried ---relieved---surprised
Theme of the story(故事主题): Keep calm/cool in face of danger/trouble. Try positively to solve
the problem with proper method. 临危不乱保持冷静。积极尝试用正确的方法解决问题。
Task 3 根据所给文字和两个段首句,构思出两段的大概内容
第一段的大概内容应是:the process that Sheldon was saved 小谢尔顿得救;
第二段的大概内容应是:Sheldon's explanaon of being late 小谢尔顿解释迟到原因
Task 4 如何写“活”动作表情细节 describing the details vividly.
1. With both his hands to his neck, Sheldon couldn't breathe at all, his eyes wide open and his
face bright red. (Sheldon 噎住时无助感)
2. 2.Panicked, his twin sister Misey cried out, "Sheldon is gonna die!"(双胞胎姐姐的惊慌)
3. Frighted and concerned, Mom hurriedly called Dad for help with heart in her throat. (妈妈
的担忧害怕)
4. Worried as Mom was, she still kept her head cool. She told Dad to use Heimlich, reminding
him not to hurt his son’s little ribs. (妈妈的冷静清醒)
5. Watching calmly as if nothing were happening , Gorgie continued eating his bread and jelly.
(哥哥的冷漠旁观无动于衷)
6. Without hesitation, George stepped up to Sheldon, lay his little son on his lap and smacked
him hard on the back. (爸爸的镇定和执行力)
7. Pointing at the jelly in Gorgie’s hand, Sheldon urged Mom to throw away the jelly instantly
he caught his breath.Sheldon 的呆萌可爱)

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