2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十一）含答案解析

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2022 高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十一）

一：原文重现

Ten minutes to go and I could lock the shop’s door behind me. There were still a few

customers who couldn’t decide what to buy. One lady tested all the lipsticks on the shelf. Her

friend was busy with the sunglasses. They must be tourists with lots of time on their hands. I had a

fake smile glued on my face as I waited behind the counter for them to make up their minds. They

walked out without buying anything. Then it was ten minutes past 5:00. They wasted my time.

Sometimes I wondered if this was really what life was about. Working from 8:00am to

5:00pm, I caught just a glimpse of the sunrise on my way to work every morning. I wished I could

stand on that hill and wait for the sun to rise. It felt like life was slipping through my fingers and

that I never enjoyed the little things in life that would make me happy.

Going home after a day’s work wasn’t much relief. At home, a family was waiting for my

attention. While preparing dinner, I put the laundry in the washing machine and took care of the

pets. After dinner, it was time to wash the dishes while the rest of the family relaxed with their

own activities. I wished I could do that, too.

My body was tired. My soul was tired. I couldn’t go on like this. It was my own fault that I

didn’t make time for myself. I had spoiled my family over the years by doing everything by

myself. No time for a walk with the dog, no time to just sit on my own and stare at nothing. Why

should I be like this? I needed serious time for myself, time to recharge my batteries and do things

that would make me a better person.

A family meeting was the first step. During the meeting, I explained why I was bad-tempered

and asked them what they thought would solve the problem. Everyone got a turn to come up with

ideas for how they could help me achieve my goal to have at least one hour per day to do what I

liked.

注意：

1、续写词数应为 150 左右；

2、请按如下格式在相应的位置作答。

The family was open to practical solutions.

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A month has passed since the new rules in the house began, and the plan is working perfectly.

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二：文本解析

【分析】本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了作者厌倦了每天上班下班包办家务的生活，

她觉得自己应该成为更好的人。于是她召开了家庭会议，家人们表示会帮助她实现她的目

标，让她每天至少有一小时的时间做自己喜欢的事情。一个月以后作者觉得自己变得快乐

了，并领悟到学会寻求帮助是最勇敢的事。

【详解】1.段落续写：

① 由第一段首句内容“家里愿意接受实际的解决办法。”可知，第一段可描写作者和

家人们一起制定了具体的计划。

② 由第二段首句内容“自房子里的新规定实施以来，一个月已经过去了，而且这个计

划运行得很完美。”可知，第二段可描写作者在一个月后生活和心理上的积极变化。

2.续写线索：

制定计划——积极响应——列表——期待——变化——感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

① 建议：suggest/advise

② 获得：get/obtain

③ 提供：give/offer

情绪类

① 积极：positive/active

高分句型

1：It has given us more time to spend together, chatting and laughing. ( 运用了现在分词作

状语)

2：It follows that asking for help is the bravest move we can make. (运用了动名词作主语)

三：续写单句训练

1. 这个家庭提出来实际的解决方案。

2. “让每个人都负责打扫自己的房间怎么样？””我建议。

3. “晚饭后轮流做饭、洗衣服和打扫卫生呢？”“他们的反应相当积极。

4. 我创建了一张图表，上面有每周的日子、家务以及每天负责任的家庭成员的名字。

5. 我已经看到我每天下班后都有一个小时。

6. 众议院的新规定开始已经过去一个月了，这个计划进展顺利。

7. 这给了我们更多的时间在一起，聊天和大笑。

8. 我不再觉得自己陷入了激烈的竞争。

9. 一个月以来，我已经和我的狗上山7公里，下班后看日落。

10. 现在，我不介意顾客是否在关门的时候在商店里逗留。

11. 我的微笑不再是假的了。因此，寻求帮助是我们所能做出的最勇敢的举动。

四：佳作展现

The family was open to practical solutions.

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A month has passed since the new rules in the house began, and the plan is working perfectly.

_______________________________________________________________________________

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