2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十五）含答案解析

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2022 高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十五）
一：原文重现
A sudden call came into Jimmy Gilleece’s bar this past March. A newly married woman who
had spent the afternoon at the dive beach bar couldn’t find her wallet. She didn’t care about her
ID, credit cards, or $150 in cash, but her wedding ring was just inside.
Gilleece, 42, didn’t like the idea that a theft could have happened at his place, so he spent
hours searching 16 different cameras, watching the woman’s every step until she went to sit on a
bench outside and left when her ride arrived. Within minutes, a young man in a hoodie (连帽衫)
approached the bench, put something in hispocket, and walked off. Gilleece posted a clip on the
bar’s Facebook page. “I didn’t want to criticize him,” he said. “I just asked if anybody knew who
the guy was.” Within hours, Gilleece got a text message from 17-year-old Rivers Prather,who
admitted taking the wallet and said he’d done it because he hadn’t eaten in two days. Thinking the
ring was fake, he threw the wallet into the ocean and took the money to buy a sandwich.
Gilleece, unsure whether he believed Prather, told the teenager to meet him at the docks(码
头).There, they got to talking, and Prather said that he wasn’t getting along with his family and
had been living in the woods for a week. Gilleece, a father oftwo, took stock of( 审视) Prather―
his small body, his flushing(涨得通红的) cheeks 一andsaw him for what he was: more of a kid
than a criminal.
However,the police were already on the case and because of the missing ring, Prather could
be facing severe charges. Gilleece decided to help. He employed two local divers to search the
waters where Prather had thrown the wallet. Meanwhile, the police wanted Gilleece to bring the
teen down to the station. Instead, Gilleece called the police and told them, “He’s going to be at the
docks with me tomorrow.”
注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 词左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Paragraph1:
A crowd had gathered to watch the two divers search in the strong current.
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Paragraph2:
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But it wasn’t over for Gilleece. ___________________________________________
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二：文本解析
题型分析：这篇读后续写属于人性光芒类的读后续写，故事里词汇和人物关系稍有难
度，续写部分是有关 Gilleece 如何雇人将戒指找到并且帮这个青春期少年解围，对尚无多
少人生经历的学生来说，难度不小。
一、准确理解材料，理清人物事件
1. 浅层信息理解
首先审题：体裁是记叙文；人称是第一、三人称；主体时态是一般过去时；记叙文
“六要素”who （Gilleece ，A newly married woman, 17-year-old Rivers Prather ，the
police ） 、 when （tomorrow ） 、 where （at the beach ） 、 what （Gilleece tried to help the
woman find her wedding ring which was stolen and thrown into the ocean. ）、why（Gilleece
didn’t like the idea that a theft could have happened at his place.）
2. 整合本篇的情节和情感线索：
海滩酒吧的老板 Gilleece 接到顾客的投诉，一位女士的钱包被偷，急于寻回放在钱包
里的订婚戒指。Gilleece 查了酒吧的监控，找到了线索，并将视频片段传到网上，想通过网
络的力量找到拿走钱包的人。几小时后，一个叫 Rivers Prather 的17 岁少年主动联系了他。
两人见面后，Prather 讲述了拿走钱包的缘由，作为两个孩子的父亲， Gilleece 决定不追究
其责任。但警察正在跟踪此案，Prather 有可能面临严重的指控。Gilleece 决定帮助这个少
年，他请了两个潜水员去 Prather 扔钱包的地方搜寻。同时，警察要求 Gilleece 将Prather 带
去警察局。但是，Gilleece 却告诉他们 Gilleece 第二天会和他一起去码头。
二、分析续写段首，确定续写方向
① 由第一段首句内容 A crowd had gathered to watch the two divers search in the strong
current（人们早已聚集过来看着两个潜水员在大浪中搜寻。）可知，第一段可描写潜水员
搜寻钱包的过程。设问如下：
1. How did the divers search for the wallet?
2. What did Gilleece, Prather and the police do?
3. How did each of them feel?
4. Did they found the wallet?
根据第二段首句 But it wasn’ t over for Gilleece.（但是这件事情对 Gilleece 来说还没有
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结束。）虽然提示语简短，但是 Gilleece 在前文中所表现出的商量和想要帮助这个少年的
决心，让学生不难猜出，他想要继续帮助 Prather。因为Gilleece 和Prather 是这个故事的主
角，不能突然消失。设问如下：
5. What did he want to do?
6. What happened to Prather?
7. What does the story intend to tell readers?
三、借助文本资源，创设续写情节
根据六要素和自己的想象，借助文本资源，创设续写两段故事的情节。
[开端] 人们围观潜水员找钱包。[故事发展]找的过程——Gilleece 焦急——警察开始盘
问。[高潮] 钱包被找到——Gilleece 想要继续帮助 Prather——Prather 不再流离失所。[结
局]Prather 痛改前非——感悟。
三：续写单句训练
1. 一群人聚集在一起，观看这两名潜水员在湍急的水流中搜寻。
2. 一个多小时过去了，没有任何戒指的迹象。
3. Gilleece 开始担心，尤其是当警察开始审问Prather，并试图让他承认保留了戒指时。
4. 每过一分钟，他都增加了他逮捕那个年轻人的机会。
5. 然后，一个潜水员跳了出来。
6. 他手里拿着钱包，里面是戒指。
7. 人群中爆发出了欢呼声。就连侦探也很高兴。
8. 但吉里斯的一切还没有结束。
9. 他一直为Prather 睡在寒冷的树林里而感到烦恼。
10. Gilleece 知道他的家足够大，可以给 Prather 一个地方住一段时间。
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