2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十四）含答案解析

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2022 高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十四）
一：原文重现
Bales left the pavement of Base Road and stepped onto snow-covered Jewell Trail. She
planned a six-hour hike through New Hampshire’s Mount Washington State Park. She had packed
for almost every emergency and intended to walk alone.
She’d checked the weather forecast posted by the Mount Washington Observatory before she
left. Based on her experience, Bales knew that her hike was realistic. Besides, she had two
emergency plans and extra layers of clothing to better adjust her body temperature as conditions
changed.
The hike up the lower part of Jewell Trail was pleasant. Bales felt excited as she walked up
into snowy paths. The sun shone through the trees and cast a shadow over her smiling face. Less
than an hour later, loads of dark clouds had replaced the sunshine, and snow covered the
surrounding trees.
She still smiled. However, the weather was showing its teeth. Bales added even more layers
to shelter herself from the cold winds and thick fog. She made her way across the snow-covered
ridge (山脊 toward Mount Washington and began to think about calling it a day. Suddenly, she
noticed something: a single set of footprints in the snow ahead of her, which had been made by a
pair of sneakers-typically not the type for hiking.
Meanwhile, Bales was getting colder, even though she was moving fast and generating some
body heat. With strong gusts of wind screaming and attacking her back and left side, she decided
to abandon her plan. The only thing, however, kept her on the trail was the sneaker tracks in the
snow.
Paragraph 1:
Bales faced a dilemma about whether to follow the tracks or not.
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Paragraph 2:
Her searching now turned into rescuing the man.
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二：文本解析
【详解】1.认真读懂所给提供的材料：通过文章描述可知，Bales 是一个很有经验的远
足者。她计划在新罕布什尔州的华盛顿山州立公园徒步旅行 6个小时。当她穿过白雪覆盖
的山脊向华盛顿山走去时，突然，她注意到一件事：她前面的雪地上有一串脚印，是一双
运动鞋留下的——通常不适合徒步旅行。狂风呼啸着袭击她的背部和左侧，她决定放弃她
的计划。然而，唯一能让她坚持下去的是雪地上的运动鞋留下的痕迹。
2.续写部分和前面的文章要衔接得当，并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致，故事
情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。
3.根据第一段首句 Bales faced a dilemma about whether to follow the tracks or not.( Bales
面临着是否跟随这些足迹的两难境地)及第二段首句 Her searching now turned into rescuing
the man.(她的搜寻现在变成了营救那个人)，第一段可以描写 Bales 面临两难境地时的思想
斗争和最终确定去搜寻那个人。第二段则可以描述 Bales 搜寻到了那个人，那个人应该身
处困境，所以她对他展开了营救。
4.续写的语言要尽可能与原文的语言保持风格上的一致。文章时态以一般过去时为主 。
应使用自己熟悉的句型和短语进行写作，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适
当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。作文要层次清晰，
要点全面，表达流畅，切合题干要求，句子结构准确，适当补充信息，使篇章结构连贯。
三：续写单句训练
1. Bales 面临着一个两难的问题，是否遵循轨道。
2. 如果她选择沿着走，她会增加徒步旅行增加时间和风险。
3. 但前面的轨道表明有人可能有危险。她不能放弃这一切。
4. 她在冰冻的雾中喊道：“外面有人吗？”你需要帮助吗？强风把她的声音带走了。
5. 然后，她小心翼翼地朝铁轨的方向走去。
6. 她绕过一个角落，发现一个男人一动不动地坐着。
7. 她的搜寻现在变成了救了那个人。
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8. 她立刻走近他，发现他的脚被冻伤了。
9. 她毫不犹豫地用暖和的衣服盖住他的身体，然后给他倒了一些含糖饮料。
10. 风呼啸而过，如果他们不离开，他们很快就会死去。
11. 她扶着那个人，沿着小路蜿蜒前进。
12. 经过巨大的努力，Bales 设法救了这个人的命。
13. 她筋疲力尽了，她觉得这一切都是值得的。
四：佳作展现
Bales faced a dilemma about whether to follow the tracks or not.
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Paragraph 2:
Her searching now turned into rescuing the man.
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五：课后练笔
I was doing a big clean-up recently and my kids were helping when my son,Freddo,came
across a knotted handkerchief with an old dark brown coin inside.“Mum,can I have this?Can I
play with this coin?” he asked.I took one look and was immediately transported to another
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