2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十三）含答案解析

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2022 高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十三）

一：原文重现

Pam Bales planned a six-hour hike through New Hampshire^ Mount. On the dashboard （汽

车仪表板） was a detailed plan ensuring she could return before the arrival of some forecasted

bad weather. Different from former hike, though, this time, she had packed for almost every

accident and intended to walk alone.

At about 8 a.m., she'd checked the weather forecast. Bales knew from experience that her

hike was realistic. Besides, she had two emergency plans and extra layers of clothing to better

protect her core temperature as conditions changed.

Bales felt excited as she walked up into snowy paths. She was wearing a fleece tank top （绒

衣） and hiking pants, and no gloves or hat because the air was mild. Thirty minutes later, she

climbed into colder air and deeper snows. She now was in a quarter-zip fleece top and gloves. At

10 a.m.? the weather was showing its teeth. Bales added more layers to resist cold winds and

dense fog. Making her way across the snow-covered ridge, she noticed something: a single set of

footprints made by a pair of sneakers. Not giving them much thought, she walked on.

By 11 a.m.? Bales was getting cold. She decided to return to her car. On her way down, she

again spotted the sneaker tracks, which suddenly made a hard left-hand turn off the trail. Now she

felt genuinely alarmed. She was sure the hiker lost his way in the low visibility. If Bales continued

to follow the tracks, she'd add risk and time to her return. But she couldn't let this go. She turned

to the left and called out, “Hello!" Nothing.

Bales followed the tracks, rounded a slight comer and saw a man sitting motionless. He wore

tennis sneakers, shorts, a light jacket and fingerless gloves. His skin was pale and he had a glazed

（呆滞的）look on his face. uOh5 hello/5 Bales approached and said, "What's your name?” The

man didn't react. Obviously, nothing was connecting for him and he was in really big trouble.

注意：

1.续写词数应为 150 左右；

2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Bales stopped being a curious and concerned hiker, and began a full-on rescue mission.

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Over the next hour, the man began to move and speak.

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二：文本解析

【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Bales 计划 6个小时内独自登雪山，在登山前

Bales 做了非常详细的准备，可是在登山途中发现了别人的脚印，疑似是有人走丢了，

Bales 没有独自离开，而是寻着脚印寻找到了一个男人，此时男人已经一动不动。

【详解】1.段落续写：

① 由第一段首句内容“Bales 不再是一个好奇和担心的徒步旅行者，开始了全面的救

援任务。”可知，第一段可描写 Bales 想帮助这个男人，开始采取救援措施。

② 由第二段首句内容“在接下来的一个小时里，John 开始走动并说话了。”可知，第

二段可描写被救的男人 John 恢复意识后，感谢 Bales 的救援。

2.续写线索：发现男人——采取援救措施——男人获救——感谢 Bales

3.词汇激活

行为类

① 冒风险：brave/take risks

② 尝试帮忙：try to help/attempt to help

③ 想起一个主意：an idea occurs to sb./come up with an idea

情绪类

① 费力的：painstaking/arduous② 感激地：gratefully/appreciatively

高分句型

1. In a weak voice, he thanked Bales and told her how he lost his way and was trapped here.

（由省略连接词 that 的宾语从句）

2. Bales kept warming him up until he signaled he could walk.（由 until 引导时间状语从

句）

三：续写单句训练

1. Bales 不再是一个好奇而关心的徒步旅行者，于是开始了一项全面的救援任务。

2. 她立刻冒着越来越狂野的天气脱下衣服，遮住那个一动不动的男人。

3. 然后 Bales 试图帮助这个人喝一些热水，但没有成功。

4. 在那个非常无助、甚至是绝望的时刻，她想到了一个主意。

5. 她迅速收集了一些冰雪，开始摩擦这个男人的身体，从手到胳膊，从脚趾到腿。

6. Bales 清楚地知道这是耗时和艰苦的，但它肯定是有效的。

7. 在接下来的一个小时里，约翰开始行动和说话。

8. 他首先通过手指显示出动作的迹象，然后睁开眼睛。

9. 他用微弱的声音感谢了 Bales，并告诉她他是如何迷路并被困在这里的。

10. Bales 一直在热身他，直到他示意他可以走路了。

11. 在Bales 的支持下，这名男子终于设法回到了车里，并被及时送往医院。

12. 摆脱危险，他感激地说，要不是 Bales 的经验和熟练的救援，他永远不会看到世界的

美丽。

四：佳作展现

Bales stopped being a curious and concerned hiker, and began a full-on rescue mission.

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_______________________________________________________________________________

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Over the next hour, the man began to move and speak.

_______________________________________________________________________________

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