2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼(十二)含答案解析
2022 高考英语读后续写精读精炼(十二)
一:原文重现
I’d been invited to join a group of people who took water and breakfast to a local park where
day laborers gathered, hoping to be chosen for work. My friend Kim and I spoke with a Mexican
man in his forties named Natal, wearing a T-shirt and faded jeans. Next to him, on the low wall
where he sat, rested a large backpack and a bedroll.
We had a wonderful conversation, ranging from the difficulty of finding work to artwork,
from Santa Fe history to Natal’s “beautiful home,” as he described it. Natal told us of his travels in
search of work. He had traveled all over the U.S. and Canada, taking jobs where he found them,
meeting people, and seeing the sights. He told us he’d especially loved Oregon.
He was filled with praise, too, for the beauty of the Sangre de Cristo Mountains outside Santa
Fe and for all the history in the town. We agreed that the area was extremely beautiful. He grinned
and told us it was important to appreciate beauty. Then, he invited us to visit him in his home in
the mountains. He wanted to show us the beauty of the trees and have us smell the freshness in the
mountains. He wanted to be a good host.
We continued to talk and it became clear that Natal’s “home” was a clearing under the trees.
His bed was the bedroll he carried with him, spread on the ground under the starlight. He loved it
there and wanted to share it with us. We declined, telling him that we were honored by the
invitation, but that our classes would keep us too busy to make the trip.
Natal’s love of his “home” was in sharp contrast to my complaint about the water in my pipes
not heating up fast enough, about my bedroom ceiling being too low, about not having central air
conditioning, about my lack of a fenced yard. How annoying I was! If I was amazed by his
appreciation for everything he had, I was completely floored (击倒) by what happened next.
注意:
1.续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I have always hated socks and it was a warm June day, so I was wearing no socks.
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He thought I felt his socks weren’t good enough for me.
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二:文本解析
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者被邀请去参加一个志愿者选拔工作,在
等待的过程中,作者和朋友金与一个墨西哥人 Natal 交谈,他们谈论了很多,交谈过程中
作者因 Natal 对“家”的爱而对自己常抱怨感到羞愧。更令作者感到感动的是, Natal 看到
作者没穿袜子,马上拿出来一包新袜子,还说袜子是新的,这种给予和收获的行为使作者
很感慨。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①.由第一段首句内容“我一直讨厌袜子,而且那是一个温暖的六月天,所以我没穿袜
子。”可知,第一段可描写 Natal 看见作者没有穿袜子,问作者是否需要袜子,并从他的
背包里拿出来一包袜子。作者告诉他自己不需要袜子。
②.由第二段首句内容“他认为我觉得他的袜子配不上我。”可知,第二段可描写
Natal 向作者解释这些袜子是全新的、没穿过的。作者感谢了他并解释了自己不要袜子。作
者被 Natal 的行为感动了。
2.续写线索:Natal 看见——询问作者——拿出袜子——作者拒绝——Natal 解释——作
者解释——感动作者——作者感悟
3词汇激活
行为类
①.注意到:notice/ find/ be aware of
②.拿出:pull out/ take out
情绪类
①.荣幸:honored/ be in great pleasure
②.感动:touched/ moved/ emotional
高分句型
1. In the midst of conversation, Natal noticed that I had no socks on my feet. (运用了由 that
引导的宾语从句作 noticed 的宾语)
2. What he didn’t know was that I was absolutely touched, almost to the point of tears. (运
用了由 what 引导的主语从句和由 that 引导的表语从句)
3. Let’s not forget that we volunteers are never the only ones with something to give—and
many times, when we reach out to help others, we receive more than we give. (运用了由 that 引
2
导的宾语从句作 forget 的宾语和由 when 连接的时间状语从句)
三:续写单句训练
1. 我一直都讨厌袜子,那是一个温暖的六月日,所以我不穿袜子。
2. 在谈话的过程中,纳塔尔注意到我的脚上没有袜子。
3. 他指着头问我是否需要袜子。
4. 我看着我的脚,好像它们刚在那里长大了。
5. 他评论说我没有穿袜子,我必须需要袜子。
6. 他毫不犹豫地打开背包,拿出一包袜子,给我看。
7. 我很快告诉他,不,不,我不需要袜子。
8. 他觉得我觉得他的袜子对我不够好。
9. 他想让我知道,他们从来没有被任何人穿过。全新的!
10. 这已经足够好了!我告诉他,我很荣幸他会把袜子给我,但我真的不喜欢穿袜子。
11. 他承认我并没有因为穿袜子而感到不安;我就是根本不想要穿袜子。
12. 他不知道的是,我完全被感动了,几乎流到了眼泪。
13. 让我们不要忘记,我们志愿者从来都不是唯一有付出的人
14. 很多时候,当我们伸手帮助别人时,我们得到的比我们付出的更多。
15. 这对我们来说是多么大的祝福啊。
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