2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十）

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2022 高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十）

一：原文重现

It had been one of those days when nothing goes right. I was due at work at 8 o’clock, but I

was ten minutes late because I overslept. I went straight to my regular post – the toy department. It

was two days before Christmas and the department was a mess. It caused me to think back to the

time when I enjoyed Christmas. That was two years ago, before I went work here.

Somehow since that time, Christmas didn’t mean much anymore, except more work and

headaches. The whole day, I was cursed, yelled at and stepped on. And I still had to finish my

Christmas shopping that evening. I had just finished explaining to a man why we didn’t sell

firecrackers, when I felt a tug on my arm.

It was one of the two kids I had been keeping an eye on for a while --- security told us to

watch kids for stealing. He and his little sister had been looking at the “discount” counter, where

we had all the cheapest toys. Before I even bent down to listen to him, I checked around for his

sister. I didn’t see her.

“Mister, do you think this would be a good present for my little sister?” he said in a broken

accent, holding up a bottle of soap bubble liquid. “I don’t want her to know about it,” he

whispered before I could even answer.

I just agreed with him. He stuck his hand in the pocket of his dirty jeans and pulled out a

fistful of change, asking if he had enough money to pay for it. “It looks like you’ll have to try to

find something else,” I said. “You need ten more cents.” I doubted it was a trick, especially at

Christmas. He looked sad and went back to find something else.

I watched him from the corner of my eye for a while as he looked at other items, but always

came back to the soap bubbles. I left the area for a few minutes and when I came back he was still

there, trying to find a cheaper gift. Somehow, the kid struck me as different from most the

troublemakers we got in the toy department.

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I went over to him and asked if he had found anything yet.

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I followed him secretly to see what he really spent the money on.

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二：文本解析

【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者是一位玩具柜台的售货员，遇到了一位

小男孩，他想买一瓶肥皂泡泡作为自己妹妹的圣诞礼物，但是自己的零钱不够，还差 10 美

分。作者建议小男孩选择其它的礼物，但小男孩看其它东西的时候，总是回到肥皂泡上。

【详解】1.段落续写：

① 由第一段首句内容“我走过去问他有没有找到什么东西。”可知，第一段可描写作

者帮助小男孩的经过。

② 由第二段首句内容“我秘密跟踪他，了解他到底把钱花在了什么地方。”可知，第

二段可描写作者想了解小男孩究竟给妹妹买了什么礼物。最终作者重获圣诞精神。

2.续写线索：失望——帮助——高兴——微笑——感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①.帮助：shake one’s head/ dumped the change/ conceal/ smile/ head for

②.好奇：follow/ went through/ met/ kept the bag tightly clenched

③ .感悟：went to buy Christmas presents/ came home with soap bubbles

情绪类

① .失望：disappointed

②.高兴：smile spread

高分句型

1. He kept the bag tightly clenched in his fist so his sister couldn’t see what he had bought

for her with his last pennies.这句话运用过去分词作宾语补足语和 what 引导的宾语从句。

2. For the first time in three years I had Christmas spirit again, but I got some really odd

looks from my family when I came home with soap bubbles.这句话运用了 when 引导的时间状

语从句。

三：续写单句训练

1. 我走到他身边，问他是否找到了什么东西。

2. 他只是摇了摇头，看上去非常失望。

3. “好吧，让我们再看看你有多少钱吧，”我说。

4. 他把零钱装在我手里藏的两个一角里扔了进去。

5. “好吧，看这里！我说，“我以前肯定数错了——你已经够那些肥皂泡了。”

6. 他的微笑又传到耳朵里，他去结账。

7. 我偷偷地跟着他去找他真正花钱的地方。

8. 他带着一件事微笑着走过这一行，然后在外面遇见了他的妹妹。

9. 他把袋子紧紧地握在拳头，让他妹妹看不见他最后的便士给她买了什么。

10. 不知怎么的，一天剩下的时间都好多了，那天晚上当我去买圣诞礼物时，我在找礼物

而不是义务。

11. 三年来我第一次又有了圣诞精神，但当我带着肥皂泡回家时，我的家人看到了一些非

常奇怪的表情。

四：佳作展现

I went over to him and asked if he had found anything yet.

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I followed him secretly to see what he really spent the money on.

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