2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（七）

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2022 高考英语读后续写精读精炼（七）

一：原文重现

In 1945, a 12-year-old boy saw a beautiful brooch （胸针）in a shop window that set his

heart racing. But the price—five dollars—was too high for Reuben Earle. Five dollars would buy

almost a week's food for his family.

Reuben couldn’t ask his father for the money. Everything his father made through fishing

went to his mother, Dora. Slim and beautiful, she was the center of the home and the glue that held

it together. The housework was never-ending, and she struggled to feed and clothe their five

children, but she was happy as her family and their well-being were all she cared about.

Nevertheless, he opened the shop's door and went inside. Standing proudly and straight in his

flour-sack （面粉袋改做的）shirt and washed-out trousers, he told the shopkeeper what he

wanted, adding, “But I don't have the money right now. Can you please hold it for me for some

time?”

"I'll try,” the shopkeeper smiled. "People around here don't usually have that kind of money

to spend on things. It should keep for a while."

Reuben respectfully touched his worn cap and walked out. He would raise the money and not

tell anybody, for he thought Mum would get surprised when she saw that brooch. On hearing the

sound of hammering （捶打）from a side street, Reuben suddenly had an idea that he could raise

money by selling the used nail bags. People built their own homes in Bay Roberts, using nails

bought in bags from a local factory. Sometimes the used bags were thrown away at the

construction site, and Reuben knew he could sell them back to the factory for five cents a piece.

That day he sold two nail bags and hid the money in a rusty soda tin.

注意：1,续写词数应为 150 左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1:

Every day after school, Reuben started his plan.

Paragraph2:

Finally, the time came!

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二：文本解析

情节分析：本文主要讲述了一个小故事： 12 岁男孩 Reuben 想为自己的母亲买一枚胸

针，可手头没有足够的钱，他找到店主，店主答应为他保留一段时间，而 Reuben 开始捡

钉子来筹钱购买胸针。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：每天放学后，Reuben 就开始他的计划。本段开头

提到 Reuben 已经开始进行筹钱计划，后文可以讲述他的筹钱过程以及最终结果，可以具

体描写一下筹钱过程中 Reuben 付出的努力。

第二段开头是：终于，是时候了！本段开头暗示 Reuben 己经筹到了足够的钱，后文

就可以描写他买下胸针的激动心情以及将胸针送给母亲 Dora 的过程。另外，母亲收到胸

针后开心、感动的反应也可以是描写的重点. 文章的主人公无疑是小男孩 Reuben,但次要人

物Dora 是不能忽略的，需要通过妈妈来衬托儿子。那么看看文章对妈妈的描述：

Slim and beautiful, she was the center of the home and the glue that held it together. The

housework was never-ending, and she struggled to feed and clothe their five children, but she was

happy as her family and their well-being were all she cared about.

如果结尾只是说妈妈很开心，就非常遗憾了，还必须和这个描写照应：对生活的乐观

和对孩子的热爱。

妈妈的开心：Wearing the beautiful brooch and knowing the story behind it, Dora was too

overjoyed to utter a word.

妈妈的疼爱：She just threw her arms tightly around her beloved son.

对话： “Merry Christmas, mom"， the son announced proudly. "You too." the proud

mother echoed.

主题升华：Well, no dream is out of reach for a willing heart.

三：续写单句训练

1. 每天放学后，鲁本都开始了他的计划。

2. 又冷又饿，鲁本四处闲逛，小心地从一条街到另一条街寻找指甲袋。

3. 为了节省更多的钱，这个下定决心的男孩甚至决定在一大早就送文件。

4. 他赢的每枚硬币都去了苏打罐，他珍贵的“银行”，然后所有的疲倦都神奇地消失了

5. 每次他经过商店橱窗里的胸针时，都会提醒他，他做了什么是值得的。

6. 一天比一天地，他的苏打水锡变得越来越重了。

7. 六个星期过去了，他才知道。然后走到了平安夜。

8. 终于，时间到了！鲁本偷偷走进他的房间，小心翼翼地拿出苏打罐，把所有的硬币都

倒出来，开始数。

9. 5 美元二十美分！他第二次数了一遍，毫无差错。

10. 他的努力工作最终得到了回报！

11. 鲁本紧紧地拿着苏打锡，立刻冲进了商店。

12. 朵拉戴着漂亮的胸针，知道背后的故事，欣喜若狂，一句话也说出来。

13. 她只是伸出双臂紧紧地搂住了她心爱的儿子。

14. “圣诞快乐，妈妈，”儿子骄傲地宣布。“你自己也是如此。”

15. 骄傲的母亲也着。嗯，没有梦想是无法不到的。

四：佳作展现

Every day after school, Reuben started his plan.

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