2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（六）

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2022 高考英语读后续写精读精炼（六）

一：原文重现

That night, I quarreled with my mother, and then stormed out of the house. While on the

road, I remembered that I did not have any money in my pocket, I did not even take my cell phone

with me to make a call home．

At the same time, I went through a noodle shop, and I suddenly felt very hungry. I wished for

a bowl of noodles, but I had no money!

The seller saw me standing before the counter and asked, “Hey little girl, you want to eat a

bowl ” “？But …but I do not carry money …” I shyly replied．

“Okay, I’ll treat you ” ．the seller said, “come in, I will cook you a bowl ”．

A few minutes later the owner brought me a steaming bowl of noodles. After eating some

pieces, I cried．

“What is it ” ？He asked．

“Nothing. I am just touched by your kindness!” I said as I wiped my tears. “Even a stranger

on the street gives me a bowl of noodles, and my mother, after a quarrel, chased me out of the

house. She is cruel （残忍的）!”

The seller sighed, “Girl, why did you think so? Think again. I only gave you a bowl of

noodles and you felt that way. Your mother has been taking care of you since you were little, why

were you not grateful and why did you hurt your mom? You should say sorry to your mom.”

I was really surprised after hearing that．

Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, and my

mother has raised me since I was little and I have never felt so, not even a little．

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；

2. 续写部分为两段，开头语已为你写好；

Paragraph 1：

Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind．

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Paragraph 2：

Before I could apologize, my mother saw me and rushed to me

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二：文本解析

【分析】本文以故事发展的顺序为线索展开，讲述了作者和妈妈吵了一架，然后冲出

了房子,也没有给家里打电话。作者走过一家面馆，突然觉得很饿，想要一碗面条，但是没

有钱，面馆老板免费请作者吃了一碗面。作者感悟到一个陌生人一碗面条都能让他心怀感

激，从小妈妈就把他养大，但却从来没有这样的感觉，作者对此进行反思。

【详解】1.段落续写：

由续写段落的首句“Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind．(就在

那一刻，许多回忆涌上了我的脑海。)”及前文“Why did I not think of that? A bowl of

noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, and my mother has raised me since I was little and

I have never felt so, not even a little.( 我以前怎么从来没有感受到呢?一个陌生人给我的一碗

面条让我心怀感激，从小妈妈就把我养大，我从来没有这样的感觉，一点也没有。)”可知，

本段续写内容主要写作者经过反思，意识到母亲对自己的好，然后回家以及回家后母亲对

他的宽容态度。

2.续写线索：反思——回忆——生活细节——回家——款待——感动、羞愧

3.词汇激活

行为类

①.到达：arrive/get to/reach

②.回家：go back home/return home

情绪类

①.感谢：be grateful/show my appreciation/show my gratitude

②.羞愧：ashamed / blush for

[高分句型

1. When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired.（此句

运用了状语从句中的省略，从句的主语与主句一致，且从句中含有 be 动词时，从句中可将

主语与 be 动词省略。）

2. Before I could apologize, my mother saw me and rushed to me “Oh, honey, you’re

back! I have prepared your favorite noodles.” （本句中运用了 before 引导的时间状语从

句。）

三：续写单句训练

1. 就在这时，我又想起了许多记忆。

2. 当我生病的时候，她总是照顾我。

3. 当我回到家时，她总是准备我最喜欢的食物。

4. 她所有的善良都回到了我身上。

5. 我应该感激她为我所做的一切，我意识到我应该立即回家，向她说对不起。

6. 回到家，我看到母亲坐在餐桌旁，担心又累。

7. 我还没来得及道歉，妈妈就看见了我，冲向我说：“哦，亲爱的，你回来了！”

8. 我准备好了你最喜欢的面条。

9. 听到这话，我忍不住倒在她的怀里。

10. “对不起，妈妈，请原谅我，”我低声对她说，眼泪流下来，为自己感到羞愧。

四：佳作展现

Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind．

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Before I could apologize, my mother saw me and rushed to me

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