12 读后续写：脱离困境型-2022年高考英语读后续写技巧与训练（新高考专用）

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读后续写：脱离困境型
Part1：经典例文（玩具店遇险）.....................................................................................1
Part2：困境类场景描写....................................................................................................3
一、环境描写（恶劣）.............................................................................................3
二、情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）.........................................................................5
三、转机描写——描写声音传来或看见了什么........................................................7
四、情绪描写（希望+努力）....................................................................................7
五、脱险描写............................................................................................................8
六、情绪描写（感恩+高兴）....................................................................................8
七、主旨描写............................................................................................................8
Part3：灵活应用...............................................................................................................9
例1：瀑布遇险..........................................................................................................9
例2：火灾救老人....................................................................................................10
例3：森林迷路脱险................................................................................................12
Part1：经典例文（玩具店遇险）
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a Saturday afternoon. The color of the sky was changing, first light gray, then dark
gray, and finally dark and dense. The wind was blowing heavily,and the trees were swaying in the
strong wind. It began to rain cats and dogs. Soon, the road was filled with puddles from the rain.
On such a stormy afternoon, my mother took my five-year-old brother, Christopher, and me
to a new big toy store she had read about in the newspaper. “So many toys,” the advertisement had
shouted in full and flashy color,“that we had to get a huge warehouse to fit them all!”

Christopher and I couldn't have been more excited. We ran across the parking lot, through the

cold rain, as fast as our little legs could carry us. We left our mother outside to battle with the

frustrating umbrella, which never worked when she wanted it to. “Christine! Take care of your

young brother!” Mother shouted at the top of her voice.

“Christine!I'm going to find the Lego section(乐高积木区)! There's a new pirate ship I want,

and I have four dollars! Maybe I can buy it!” Christopher exclaimed and ran off excitedly. I only

half heard him. I took a right turn and, to my wide-eyed delight, found myself in the midst of

the Barbie(芭比) World.

I was studying a Barbie and doing some simple math in my head when suddenly an

earthshaking clap of thunder roared from the storm outside. I jumped at the noise, dropping the

doll to the floor. The lights flickered(闪烁) once and went out, covering everything in a blanket of

blackness. Thunder continued to shake the sky and lightning illuminated the store for seconds,

casting frightening shadows on my mind.

注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;

2.至少使用 5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

“Oh no,” I thought, “Where's Christopher?”

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Paragraph 2:“Christine, I'm here.”

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答案

[写作提示]原文讲述“我”和弟弟以及妈妈去买玩具,结果“我”和弟弟刚进去玩具店

没多久,由于雷电,商店停电,我们都看不到对方。根据第一段的段首句,本段应该是作者在黑

暗中寻找弟弟的情景。在续写时,除了动作,还要注意心理描述。根据第二段的段首句可知,

弟弟找到了“我”。此段应该描述姐弟俩相遇的情景。这里的描述应该有“劫后余生”的

感觉。

Paragraph 1:

“Oh no,” I thought, “Where's Christopher?” Scared, I was frozen on the spot, overcome with

the need to see my brother, hug him and make certain he was all right. My stomach twisted and

turned inside. I ran up and down the aisles through the darkness, panic filling my small chest and

making it difficult to breathe. I knocked into displays of candy and tripped over toys, all the while

frantically calling my brother's name. Anxious as I was, I could barely see his figure. Tears

of frustration and fear trickled down my face, but I continued to run.

“哦，不，”我想，“克里斯托弗在哪里？”我当场冻僵了，需要见到我哥哥，拥抱

他，确保他没事。我的胃扭曲了，转了进去。我在黑暗中跑来来跑去，恐慌充满了我的小

胸部，呼吸困难。我一直在看糖果，被玩具绊倒

疯狂地叫着我哥哥的名字。虽然我很焦虑，但我几乎看不见他的身影。沮丧和恐惧的

眼泪从我的脸上滴了下来，但我继续跑着。

Paragraph 2:

“Christine, I'm here.” Excitement took my breath away—there in the dark Lego aisle I found

Christopher. He was standing alone, perfectly still, hiding under the pirate ship set. I began to cry

out from relief, throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly. He hugged me back, say-

ing, “I knew if I waited here, Christine, you would be able to find me.”Then, I took his hand in

mine and we went to find our mother, who must be desperately searching the store for us.

“克里斯汀，我在这里。“兴奋让我喘住了呼吸——在黑暗的乐高走廊里，我找到了

克里斯托弗。他独自站着，完全不动，藏在海盗船下面。我开始欣慰地大叫起来，伸出双

臂搂住他，紧紧地拥抱着他。他拥抱我，说：“我知道如果我在这里等着，克里斯汀，你

就能找到我。”然后，我抓住我的手，我们去找我们的母亲，她一定是拼命地在商店里找

我们。

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