10 读后续写：历险型（故事构造“三大套路”）-2022年高考英语读后续写技巧与训练（新高考专用）

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读后续写：历险型

Part1：经典例文（森林遇险）.......................................................................................................................1

Part2：历险类细节描写..................................................................................................................................3

①海上遇难............................................................................................................................................3

②洪水....................................................................................................................................................5

③地震....................................................................................................................................................5

④火灾....................................................................................................................................................5

⑤受伤....................................................................................................................................................6

⑥丛林逃生............................................................................................................................................7

Part3：历险类故事构造“三大套路”...........................................................................................................8

套路一：恶劣环境要烘托........................................................................................................................8

套路二：转折思维技巧好........................................................................................................................8

套路三：万能升华要牢记........................................................................................................................9

Part4：灵活应用...........................................................................................................................................10

例1：山洞遇险......................................................................................................................................10

Part5：高考真题再现....................................................................................................................................12

真题 1：爸爸与我森林遇险【2018 年6月浙江卷】.............................................................................12

真题 2：旅游途中遇狼【2017 年6月浙江卷】.....................................................................................14

Part1：经典例文（森林遇险）

Brady

was a recently retired search and

rescue

dog.He was not happy and missed his owner Al because

Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Al’s nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his

friend Zach went on a overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they

realized that lightning had set the woods on

fire

.Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to

another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox( 火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasn’t

helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach

pulled

Steve’ s arm. “Let’s go! We can make

it back to the river

we crossed today.” Steve pulled Brady’s leash（皮带）and their heads down against the

strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke

，and pine

branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do

was to make it down to the river…

Brady

barked

a sharp warning

. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path. They’d

never make it through that. They would have to find another escape

route

. The dog was pulling at his leash

trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained

to do, and yet Steve was

uneasy. It seemed to him they were moving away from the river.

Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The

boys yelled and shouted for him，but he didn’t come back.

They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up a slope

（斜坡）. He

couldn’t blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didn’t have a

clue which way.They hadn’t gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him.

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Paragraph1：

“Where’ve you been?” Steve cried.

Paragraph 2：

Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.

参考范文:

Paragraph 1

“Where've you been?"Steve cried Brady stopped directly in front of him and started pushing him back toward the

slope they’d just climbed. When Steve still didn’t get it, Brady grabbed the boy's jeans and pulled harder. The message

was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that

had been a long time ago. Was he still sharp enough to get them through this? Brady pulled again,urgently, “0K,big

guy,” Steve decided...

Paragraph 2

Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog stopped to get his escape route.

Often he changed direction. How long they’d walked Steve had no idea. He just held onto Brady’s leash with one

hand and kept putting one foot in front of the other. He was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound of

rushing water. The river! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until they jumped in cool,running water. “Brady,

you did it!”

第1段：

“你去哪儿了？史蒂夫叫道，布雷迪直接停在他面前，开始把他推回他们刚爬上去的斜坡。当史蒂夫

仍然没有得到它，布雷迪抓住男孩的牛仔裤，并拉得更用力。信息很清楚，但史蒂夫犹豫了。他当然记得

他叔叔说过布雷迪救他的命，但那是很久以前的事了。他还能让他们度过难关吗？布雷迪又紧急地拉了一

下，“0K，大个子，”史蒂夫决定......

第2段：

布雷迪带领他们回到斜坡上，进入树林。这只大狗停了好几次，以获得他的逃跑路线。他经常改变方

向。他们走了多久，史蒂夫不知道。他只是用一只手抓住布雷迪的皮带，继续把一只脚放在另一只前面。

听到哗哗的水声，他几乎麻木了。河流！孩子们大喊一声，摇摇晃晃地向前跑，直到他们跳进凉爽的流水

里。 “布雷迪，你做到了！”

Part2：历险类细节描写

①海上遇难

天气

*The sky is darkened with gloomy clouds. Lighting flashed across the sky, followed by a clap of thunder. Minutes

later, there came a downpour.

*The wind was howling and the waves smacked repeatedly against her face.

海上

*The sea boiled in the storm.

*The angry waves crashed against the side of the boat, with water splashing here and there.

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