08 读后续写：友情类（故事构造“三步法”）-2022年高考英语读后续写技巧与训练（新高考专用）

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读后续写：友情类
Part1：经典例文（朋友和解）.......................................................................1
Part2：友情类故事构造“三步法”................................................................4
第一步：友情出现危机或困难（故事冲突）...........................................4
第二步：友情弥补（解释、认错、弥补）...............................................5
第三步：友情升华（懂得珍惜）..............................................................6
Part3：灵活应用..............................................................................................6
例1：三位好朋友与读书俱乐部...............................................................6
例2：陌生地方的新友情..........................................................................9
例3：结识到新朋友................................................................................12
例4：我们的友谊...................................................................................14
Part1：经典例文（朋友和解）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数应为 150 左右。
“Want to go to the pool tomorrow?” Rosa asked Stephanie during recess. The pool at the
YMCA was one of their favorite places, where they learnt and practiced swimming.
Rosa and Stephanie did everything together. They rode the school bus together. They sat
together during lunch. They took dance lessons together and they even went to the same summer
camp. Their classmates called them “twins”. They were best friends. Most of the time.
Sometimes, though, when Stephanie was with other friends, she ignored Rosa or treated her
like a little kid, even though they were the same age. Rosa and Stephanie had played together
since they were babies, but sometimes Stephanie didn't act like a friend.
Today was one of those times.
“Sorry. I’m already going to the pool,” Stephanie said. “Toni and Vanessa and I are going.”

She gave a broad smile, but in Rosa’s eyes, it wasn’t her nice smile. Saying nothing more, she

walked straight away to join Toni and Vanessa, and Rosa was left standing alone, with her face

burned and an angry tension coming into her limbs.

After school, at dance class, Stephanie talked and giggled with the other dancers as they

stretched in front of the mirror. When Rosa came in, Stephanie didn’t say hello to her, but just

another smile. Rosa hesitated for a while about whether she should join them, but she still felt too

upset.

Then she noticed Kiara, the new girl. Rosa joined her and began stretching, too. Kiara smiled

and Rosa smiled back. The two girls began to talk. Rosa discovered that Kiara was not the quiet

girl she had thought she was. Kiara talked a lot — about her little brother, about the tree house her

uncle had built and even about swimming. “I love swimming,” Kiara said. “I will hold a pool part

at the YMCA.Would you like to come?” “Yes. It’s awesome.” Rosa responded. She tried not to

check the mirror to see if Stephanie had noticed. She hoped Stephanie felt left out.

注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

After the dance class, when Rosa boarded the bus, Stephanie was waiting in their usual seat.

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When Rosa saw Stephanie in low spirits, her heart sank.

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【答案】After the dance lesson, when Rosa boarded the bus, Stephanie was waiting in their usual

seat. Seeing Rosa, Stephanie quickly moved her backpack off the seat to make room for her. But

Rosa walked past and slid into the empty seat next to Kiara. They were talking about the pool

party when Stephanie went over. “Do you still want to go swimming tonight?” Stephanie asked.

“I’m already going,” she said without looking up. “Kiara and I are going together.” Rosa smiled.

Stephanie nodded and looked at her feet.

舞蹈课结束后，罗莎上车时，斯蒂芬妮在他们通常的座位上等着。看到罗莎，斯蒂芬妮迅

速把背包从座位上移下来，为她腾出空间。但罗莎走了过去，滑进了基亚拉旁边的空座位

上。当斯蒂芬妮过去的时候，他们正在谈论泳池派对。“你今晚还想去游泳吗？””斯蒂

芬妮问。“我已经要走了，”她没有抬起头来地说。“基亚拉和我要一起去了。”罗莎笑

着说。斯蒂芬妮点了点头，看着她的脚。

When Rosa saw Stephanie in low spirits, her heart sank. Getting even didn’t feel the way she

had expected. She could walk away with her new friend and not look back. But when she saw

Stephanie's watery eyes, her heart beat painfully. "Maybe we could all go together.” Rosa said.

Stephanie’s face lit up. “I’m sorry for ignoring you. Thank you for your tolerance.” Stephanie

said. Rosa gave her a hug and said, “I was too sensitive. Thank you for your tolerance, too.” The

two girls smiled at each other, which was their nice smile.

罗莎看到斯蒂芬妮情绪低落，心沉了。甚至没有像她预期的那样感觉到。她可以和她

的新朋友一起走开，而不是回头看。但当她看到斯蒂芬妮流泪时，她的心痛苦地跳动着。

“也许我们都可以一起去。”罗莎说。斯蒂芬妮的脸亮了起来。“我很抱歉忽视了你。谢

谢你的宽容。”斯蒂芬妮说。罗莎给了她一个拥抱，并对她说：“我太敏感了。也感谢你

的宽容。两个女孩互相微笑，这是她们美好的微笑。

【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Rosa 和Stephanie 是从小到大的好朋友，但有时 Stephanie

表现得不像朋友，有一天Rosa 问Stephanie 要不要一起去基督教青年会的游泳池游泳，

Stephanie 说她去过了就不去了，这让Rosa 很尴尬；之后在舞蹈课上 Rosa 结识了新来的女

孩Kiara，Rosa 邀请Kiara 一起去游泳，想以此来报复 Stephanie。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“舞蹈课结束后，Rosa 登上公共汽车时，Stephanie 正在她们平常的座

位上等着。”可知，第一段可描写Stephanie 为Rosa 腾位置，但 Rosa 并未坐在Stephanie 身

旁，而是与 Kiara 坐在了一起，Stephanie 问Rosa 还去不去游泳，Rosa 说她和 Kiara 一起去，

Stephanie 很失落。

②由第二段首句内容“当 Rosa 看到 Stephanie 情绪低落时，她的心一沉。”可知，第二段

可描写看到失落的 Stephanie，Rosa 并没有报复的快感，Rosa 邀请Stephanie 一起去游泳，

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