专题07 期末必考话题满分范文必背20篇-2022-2023学年七年级英语上学期期末复习查缺补漏冲刺满分(牛津上海版)

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专题 07 期末必考话题满分范文必背 20
一、话题作文
1Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “How to Keep Healthy”.
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【答案】例文
Nowadays, people’s life is becoming better and better. And we pay more attention to keeping healthy. Here is
some advice on how to keep healthy.
Firstly, we should eat a balanced diet. This means eating lots of different kinds of food and lots of fresh fruit
and vegetables. Besides, we shouldn’t eat much junk food. It’s bad for our health. Secondly, we must exercise
every day. Exercise makes us stronger and helps us relax. Thirdly, we must try to sleep early at night and get up
early in the morning. This point is especially important for the students.
To sum up, health is wealth. Keeping healthy is very important for us. I hope everybody can live a healthy
life.
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文,要求围绕“How to Keep Healthy”写一篇不少于 60 词的作文。
2. 写作指导:本文应该紧扣话题,详细描述人们保持健康应该有哪些做法。时态以一般现在时为主,人
称可用第一人称复数和第三人称穿插使用。文章可分为三段:第一段引出话题,第二段可从饮食、锻炼
和睡眠三方面详细描述如何做,第三段总结呼吁大家要健康生活。文章要层次分明,条理清晰。
2Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A Change about My bad Habits”.(请以“改变我的坏
习惯”为题,写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
Suggest questions:
1. What bad habits did you have?
2. Why were they bad?(Give at least two reasons)
3. How are your habits now?
A Change about My bad Habits
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【答案】范文:
A Change about My bad Habits
In the past, I have two bad habits. One is to play too many computer games. The other is to eat unhealthily.
When I played too many computer games, I always forgot to finish my homework which led to my bad
marks in the school. My parents were worried about me. And sometimes I stayed out to play computer games
which caused me to feel sleepy in class. Therefore, I didn’t do well in the subjects. As for the other bad habit, I
used to eat fast food which made me fat. And I didn’t like eating vegetables and fruits. That couldn’t help me
digest.
But now, I don’t play computer games any more. I spend my time on study. And I also eat healthily and do
more exercise. I often eat green vegetables and many fruits. I think I will keep away from the two bad habits
forever.
【详解】题干解读:题目要求以“改变我的坏习惯”为题,写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文;要求根据包含
所有提示。
写作指导:此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主,采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用 3段落格式,
第一段:阐述自己的坏习惯有哪些;第二段:阐述为什么这些习惯是不好的;第三段:阐述现在这些习
惯如何了。
3Write at least 60 words about the topic "How to be healthy".(以“如何保持健康”为题写一篇不少于 60
词的短文,标点符号不占格)
Suggested questions:
What did you use to do?
What were healthy in your past life?
What were unhealthy in your past life?
What are you going to do to be healthy?
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【答案】例文
How to be healthy
I used to eat too much meat and too few vegetables. So I was too fat. I think if I keep eating too much meat,
I'll be unhealthy. I should eat more vegetables and fruit. They are healthy food. They are good for me. And I
shouldn't eat too much meat. I only need some meat every day. What's more, I need to do more exercise. Thus I
can live a healthy and happy life.
【详解】1.题干解读:
本题目属于命题写作,采用记叙文的形式书写,具体内容参照题目中提出的四个问题,围绕“过去是做
什么的”、“在过去的生活中什么是健康的”、“在过去的生活中什么是不健康的”、“为了变得健康
你会做什么”四个方面进行描述即可。
2.例文点评:
文章描述作者过去的生活习惯,以及目前为了保持健康所做出的的一些改变,同时强调改变饮食的同时
还要加强锻炼,享受健康快乐的生活。整体内容完整,采用“过去——现在——将来”时间顺序进行描
述;时态涉及一般现在时、一般过去时、一般将来时,结构清晰条理。
3.高分亮点:
短语:used to do sth. 过去常常做某事;keep doing sth. 保持做某事;be good for sb.对某人有好处;do more
exercise 参加更多锻炼。
句型:if 引导条件状语从句;what’s more 除此之外。
【点睛】记叙文写作属于写作类题目常见的一种题型,处理该类型题目时,首先,要紧紧围绕中心意思
展开论述,如本题中心意思就是:如何保持健康;其次,根据中心意思选取适当的切入点,如本题中从
三个方面展开了论述,分别是:过去的生活习惯,现在生活习惯的变来还将加强锻炼,进一步促
进健康。次,根据所描述事生时间,确定所用时态准确,如本题中就用了一般过去时、一般
现在时、一般将来时三种时态。最后,人称要选对,如本题中根据文章的提示选用的是第一人称。
4Write at least 60 words about the topic "My birthday party".(以“我的生日派对”为题写一篇不少于
60 词的短文,标点符号不占格)
Suggested questions:
When and where is your birthday party held?
Who will you invite to your party?
What will you do in the party?
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