初中英语九年级主题作文16-人际交流

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主题：人际交流

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本综合训练的主题是人际交流,这是同学们生活中必不可少的实用性话题.同学们在日常生活和学习过

程中学会适当开展沟通交流,会使自己的生活和学习更快乐美好.有关这个主题的英语作文,可以是针对同学

朋友与他人沟通交流过程中遇到的问题提出建议,或者介绍如何与他人和谐相处,等等.

题目回放一

同学们若想实现有效沟通,建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于表达,而且要学会倾听.请你根据下列写作要

点,写一篇题为 Being a good listener 的英语演讲稿,词数 90 左右.

审题指引

1 审体裁：本文是一篇演讲稿,属于应用文.

2 审内容：主要介绍成为一个好的倾听者的作用.

3 审时态：以一般现在时为主.

4 审人称：以第一人称为主.

框架设计

开头：开篇以演讲的形式引出主题.

中间：从不同角度讲述成为一个好的倾听者的作用.

结尾：紧扣主题,总结全文.

段落素描

1. First paragraph: Hello, everyone. The topic of my speech is ...(It is my great honor to be here to share my ideas

with you.)

(...)

2.The body: Listening to others reflects ...Parents need to ...Teachers...We students...(Firstly, I would like to say

that listening to others can ... What is more...Besides...)

(...)

3.Last paragraph: In a word, being a good listener can help us get closer to each other.

(...)

Thanks for listening!

范本淬炼

Being a good listener

Good evening, everyone. The ① topic of my speech today is “Being a good listener.”

Listening to others ② reflects our respect to others, and helps us improve our interpersonal relationship in our

daily life. Parents should listen to their children ③ so that they can have a good understanding of each other and

make it easy to get along with each other. Teachers need to listen to their students,④ which helps them know their

students' needs and ⑤ improve the teacher-student relationship. In the meantime, students are supposed to listen to

their teachers, which helps them ⑥ benefit a lot in their school life.

In a word,⑦ being a good listener can help us get closer to each other.

Thanks for listening!

①topic,主题.

②reflect,体现,反映.

③ so that 引导目的状语从句.

④which 引导非限制性定语从句.

⑤improve,改善.

⑥ benefit a lot,受益匪浅.

⑦ being a good listener 是动名词短语充当主语.

亮点点评

1.文章开头说明主题,然后从父母与孩子、教师与学生之间互相倾听两个层面论述主题,尾段总结.整篇

文章首尾呼应,逻辑严谨,层次感强.

2.文中采用目的状语从句、非限制性定语从句等亮点句式,为文章添彩.

3.文中用语丰富、精准,如使用 interpersonal relationship, have a good understanding of each other, improve

the teacher-student relationship, get closer to each other 等,增强了文章的可读性.

题目回放二

父母是我们生活中最亲近的人.中学时代的我们在与父母沟通交流中难免会出现一些状况.那么我们应

该怎样和父母交流呢?请以 How we communicate with our parents 为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈自己的看法.

审题指引

1 审体裁：本文是一篇表达观点的作文,属于议论文.

2 审内容：以如何和父母交流为主题展开讨论.

3 审时态：以一般现在时为主.

4 审人称：以第一人称为主.

框架设计

开头：开篇可以从与父母交流的重要性谈起,引出主题.

中间：主体段落主要叙述与父母交流的方法.可从不同角度来谈,如分享想法、学会倾听、要有礼貌等.

结尾：紧扣主题,总结与父母交流的意义.

段落素描

1. First paragraph: Communication with our parents is important, for it helps us...

(...)

2.The body: Firstly, we should respect our parents, and listen to them politely and attentively when they are

talking. Secondly, we can...

(...)

3.Last paragraph: Anyway, as long as we find proper ways to communicate with our parents, we will...

(...)

范本淬炼

How we communicate with our parents

Communication with our parents is important,① for it helps us have a good understanding of each other and

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