初中英语九年级主题作文15-介绍人物

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主题：介绍人物

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本综合训练的主题是介绍人物.这是同学们所熟悉的日常话题,常有以下英语写作命题形式：介绍自己,

可以用于演讲等场合；介绍他人,如家庭成员、老师、朋友、同学或心目中的英雄等,并表达感恩、喜爱或

敬佩之情等.

题目回放一

同学们都知道,老师在我们的学习生涯中扮演着不可或缺的角色.请以 My favorite teacher 为题,用英语写

一篇短文,根据要点进行描述.

写作要点：

1.What does he/she look like?

2.Why do you like him/her?

3.词数 90 左右；

4.可适当增加细节及要点以外的内容,使行文连贯；

5.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名.

审题指引

1审体裁：写人的作文,属于记叙文.

2审内容：介绍自己最喜爱的一位老师,表达对老师的喜爱及感激之情.

3 审时态：以一般现在时为主.

4 审人称：以第三人称为主.

框架设计

开头：介绍自己最喜爱的老师,引出主题.

中间：着重说明为什么最喜欢这位老师.

结尾：表达感激和难忘之情.

段落素描

1. First paragraph: There are a number of teachers in my life, but what impresses me most is ...

(...)

2.The body: I used to ... My English teacher... Thanks to her help, I...

(...)

3.Last paragraph: I am lucky to have such a nice teacher, and I will love her forever.(I often think about my

English teacher, who encouraged me and helped me a lot in my studies.)

(...)

范本淬炼

My favorite teacher

There are a number of teachers ① who have left me deep impressions. However, my English teacher is my

favorite.

I used to show no confidence, and ② never dared to raise my hand to answer questions in class. My English

teacher was kind to and ③ patient with me. She often encouraged me, especially when I was in trouble. Thanks to

her help and encouragement, I have become more confident and ④ am willing to express my ideas in class.

I am very lucky to have such a nice teacher. I will remember her ⑤ forever.

①who 引导定语从句.

② never dare to do sth.,从来不敢做某事.

③(be) patient with sb.,对某人有耐心.

④ be willing to do sth.,愿意做某事

⑤forever,永远.

亮点点评

1.文章段落设计合理,层次分明.开篇点题介绍作者最喜爱的老师,中间主体段落集中说明喜爱老师的原

因,结尾再次扣题并表达自己的情感.

2.文章长短句错落有致,尤其是采用定语从句和状语从句等句式,体现了作者的语言驾驭能力.

3.词汇、短语丰富,如使用 used to, show no confidence, dare to do sth. ,be patient with, be in trouble, thanks

to, be willing to do sth. ,express 等,为文章增色.

题目回放二

你校的校刊向全校学生征集英语稿件.请以“感恩”为主题,用Thank you, my...作为题目,写一篇英语短

文,向大家介绍一下你最感恩的人,并说明原因.

审题指引

1 审体裁：本文是一篇写人的作文,属于记叙文.

2 审内容：描述自己要感恩的人,比如自己的妈妈,说明为何感恩.

3 审时态：以一般现在时为主.

4 审人称：以第一人称为主.

框架设计

开头：点题,说明“我”对妈妈的感恩之情.

中间：主体段落记述妈妈为“我”做的令“我”感激的事情.

结尾：再次表达“我”的感激之情.

段落素描

1. First paragraph: No matter where we are, we will bear in mind those who helped us, and ... In my mind, my

mother is ...

(...)

2. The body: My mother takes good care of me every day. Whenever I am in trouble, she...

(...)

3. Last paragraph: I must thank my mother for her care of me. I will

(...)

范本淬炼

Thank you, my mother

① No matter where we are, we will bear in mind those who helped us, and never forget their kindness. In my

mind, my mother is one of those to whom I must ② express my heartfelt gratitude.

My mother takes good care of me everyday. ③ Whenever I am in trouble, she is always the first to comfort,

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