初中英语九年级主题作文14-校园生活

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主题：校园生活

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本单元的主题是学校生活,引导同学们围绕三年初中生活,用英语谈论校园人物或事物的进步、变化等.

这类作文通常是提示性作文,同时兼有开放性.此类话题源于实际生活,要注意从平时的学校生活中提炼素材

并写出自己的所感所想.

适用于本单元的关联主题有很多,如 My best friend, The person/ teacher that I want to thank most, A

person I will never forget, An unforgettable day, A touching moment in my life 等.

题目回放

法国作家雨果曾说,“进步,才是人应该有的现象”.回首三年的初中时光,你在学习和生活中一定取得了

不少进步,比如学科知识、生活技能、人际交往、体育锻炼、良好习惯等方面.请自拟标题,结合自身的亲身

经历,用英语谈一谈自己的进步.

写作要求：

1.选取至少两个方面；

2.结合亲身经历,谈一谈过去与现在的不同；

3.谈谈自己如何取得这些进步的；

4.书写工整,语句通顺连贯,词数 90 左右.

注意事项：文中不得出现你的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息.

参考词汇：used to, try sb.'s best to do sth. , make progress in

审题指引

1 审题材：该写作任务要求回首三年的初中时光,结合自己的亲身经历谈一谈自己的进步,属于记叙文.

2 审内容：在写记叙文时要交代清楚事情发生的时间、地点、人物、经历等.

3 .审时态：讲述过去的事,用一般过去时、过去完成时等过去时态；表达现在的看法或观点,用一般现在时

或现在完成时等现在时态.

4 审人称：结合自身经历谈自己的进步,以第一人称为主.

框架设计

开头：开篇点明主题,说明自己在初中三年学习过程中取得了较大进步.

中间：主体段落详细叙述取得进步的经历.

结尾：最后叙述对自己取得这些进步的感悟,再次突出主题.

段落素描

1. First paragraph: How time flies! Over the past three years, I have made great progress.(How time flies!

Looking back upon the past three years in the junior high school, I find that I have made great progress.)

(...)

2.The body: When I was a first-grader, I was not good at ...My English teacher encouraged me a lot ... Now, my

English has improved a lot. Besides,...I have become...(At first, I was poor at English ... Thanks to ...,I have made

great progress in my English study. Moreover,...)

(...)

3.Last paragraph: I will never forget my English teacher. The progress that I made was due to...(Without my

English teacher's help, I would not have made such great progress. I will always remember her.)

(...)

范本淬炼

The progress that I have made

How time flies! Over the past three years, I have made great progress.

When I was ① a first-grader in the junior high school, I was not good at English, and was even afraid of

answering questions in the English class. My English teacher encouraged me a lot, and ② gave me useful advice on

how to learn English. With her help, I studied hard and ③ spent much time learning English. Now, my English has

improved a lot. Besides, I used to be shy. My English teacher ④ encouraged me to join a study group and learn to

⑤ make speeches in public. I have become active and confident.

The progress that I made was ⑥ due to my English teacher's help and encouragement. I will never forget her.

①a first-grader,一年级学生.

② give me useful advice on,在······方面给我有用的建议.

③ spend much time doing sth.,花费大量时间做某事.

④ encourage sb.to do sth.,鼓励某人做某事.

⑤ make speeches,发表演讲.

⑥due to,由于.

亮点点评

1.文章紧扣主题,内容完整,设段合理,主次分明.主体段落叙述较为生动,增强了文章的可读性.

2.文中时态运用得当,一般现在时、现在完成时、一般过去时、一般将来时等切换自如.

3.文中长短句错落有致,尤其是使用了状语从句、定语从句等,丰富了文章句式.

4.文中用词丰富,如使用 make great progress, be afraid of, encourage sb. to do sth. , spend much time doing

sth. , make speeches in public, become active and confident, due to 等亮点短语,增强了文章的语言表现力.

The progress that I have made

How time flies! ① Looking back upon the past three years in the junior high school, I find that I have made

great progress.

At first, I was poor at English, and often ② felt bored in the English class because I could not understand ③

what my English teacher was saying. Sometimes, I was even afraid of answering English questions. Thanks to my

English teacher's help and ④encouragement, I have made great progress in my English study. Moreover, I was shy,

but with the help of my English teacher,⑤ who encouraged me to practice making speeches in public, I have ⑥

become self-confident,

⑦ Without my English teacher's help, I would not have made such great progress in the past three years. I

will always remember her.

① look back upon,回顾.

② feel bored in,对......感到无聊.

③what 引导宾语从句.

④encouragement,鼓励.

⑤who 引导非限制性定语从句.

⑥ become self-confident.变得自信.

⑦without sb.'s help,若无某人的帮助.

亮点点评

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