初中英语九年级主题作文13-保护环境

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主题：环境保护

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本单元的主题是保护环境,引导同学们培养环保意识,关注和保护环境.与本主题有关的英语作文命题通

常有提示性作文和看图作文等.同学们写此类作文时,要注意点明写作意图,描述问题所在,并提出解决问题的

建议.

可适用于本单元的关联主题有很多,如How to protect the environment, Creating a greener world, Walking

to school is a good choice 等.

题目回放

随着社会的发展,我们的生活越来越便利,但我们周围的环境问题却变得日益严峻.环境问题严重影响着

人们的工作、学习和生活.我们应该如何保护环境呢?假如你是李华,你校要在 6月5日这个世界环境日开展

以“保护我们的环境”为主题的演讲比赛.请你自拟标题,根据以下要求,写一篇 90 词左右的英语演讲稿.

写作要求：

1.举例说明现存的环境问题；

2.说明我们应采取怎样的措施保护环境.

审题指引

1审体裁：演讲稿,属于应用文.

2 审内容：点明环境现状和问题,提出应对措施.

3 审时态：以一般现在时为主.

4 审人称：以第一人称为主.

框架设计

开头：第一段点明环境现状,引入主题.

中间：主体段落列举现存的环境问题.

结尾：最后针对问题提出具体应对措施.

段落素描

1.First paragraph: Today is June 5, and it is World Environment Day. It reminds us to protect the environment

because ...(Today is June 5, celebrated as World Environment Day around the globe. It reminds us to protect the

environment, for the pollution around us...)

(...)

2.The body: Over the past few years, our governments have done something to control pollution, but it still exists.

Most vehicles emit..:some people throw trash ...; and in some areas, farmers pollute the soil with chemicals... (In

recent years, governments at various levels have taken measures to control pollution, but it still arises. In some

areas ,factories discharge ...; electronic products produce ...; and some people cut down trees,...)

(...)

3.Last paragraph: Therefore, we must find ways to protect the environment. As high school students, we can ...

Besides, we should...(In view of these facts, we must take action to protect the environment. As high school

students, we can... More importantly, we need to...)

(...)

范本淬炼

Protecting our environment

Hello, everyone! Today is June 5, and it is World Environment Day. It ① reminds us to protect the

environment because the pollution around us ② does harm to our health.

Over the past few years, our government has done something to control pollution, but it still exists. Most

vehicles ③ emit exhaust gas and make noise; some people throw trash into rivers; and in some areas, farmers

pollute the soil with ④ chemicals such as fertilizers and pesticides.

Therefore, we must find ways⑤ to protect the environment. As high school students, we can go to school by

bus, by bike or on foot. Besides, we should use less plastic bags, ⑥ which cause white pollution.

① remind sb. to do sth.,提醒某人做某事.

② do harm to,损害.

③ emit exhaust gas and make noise,排放废气和产生噪音.

④ chemicals such as fertilizers and pesticides,诸如化肥和杀虫剂等化学品.

⑤ to protect ...是动词不定式短语充当后置定语,修饰前面的 ways.

⑥which 引导非限制性定语从句.

亮点点评

1.文章紧扣保护环境这一主题,内容完整,要点齐全,段落清晰.

2.文中运用了一些不同的句式,如because 引导的原因状语从句和 which 引导的非限制性定语从句,为文

章增色不少.

3.作者使用了较为丰富的词汇和短语,如 remind sb. to do sth., do harm to, control, exist, vehicle, emit 等,增

强了文章的生动性.

Protecting our environment

Hello, everyone!

Today is June 5,① celebrated as World Environment Day around the globe. It reminds us to protect the

environment, for the pollution around us has seriously ② affected our health and daily life.

In recent years, governments at various levels have ③ taken measures to control pollution, but it still arises. In

some areas, factories ④ discharge waste smoke, exhaust gas, waste water, and residual waste; ⑤ electronic

products produce electromagnetic radiation; and some people cut down trees, ⑥ resulting in increased carbon

dioxide in the air.

⑦ In view of these facts, we must take action to protect the environment. As high school students, we can go

to school by bus or on foot, and tell our relatives and friends to go to work by bus or ⑧ by subway train instead of

by car. More importantly, we need to save as much energy as possible ⑨ by saving water, turning off the lights

when we leave the house, and using recyclable paper in our studies.

① celebrated as...,作为···.··被庆祝.

② affect our health and daily life,影响我们的健康和日常生活.

③ take measures,采取措施.

④discharge,排出.

⑤ electronic products,电子产品.

⑥ resulting in increased carbon dioxide in the air,导致空气中二氧化碳增加,此处现在分词短语充当结果状语.

⑦ in view of these facts,鉴于这些事实.

⑧ by subway train,乘坐地铁.

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