初中英语九年级主题作文11-情感问题

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主题：情感问题

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本单元的主题是用英语探讨情感问题,谈论日常生活中身边的人或事给自己带来的情绪变化和影响.写

此类文章时,可以通过描述一件发生过的具体事情来表达自己的喜、怒、哀、乐,尤其包括描述生活或学习

中的烦恼.写作过程中,可以先介绍具体事情,再写出它对人的影响以及人的感受.同学们在把握教材主题基础

上,要认真体会这类主题作文的写作思路和方法,以及有关句式和用词.

可适用于本单元的关联主题有很多,如An unforgettable experience, An unforgettable day 等.

题目回放

网络的出现改变着人们传统的生活方式,也不同程度地影响着同学们的学习和生活.坐在家中即可浏览

众多网上图书馆丰富的图书；几秒钟内,便可收到相隔万里的来信,或者在最短时间内获得各地详细的信息,

等等.但网络也非常复杂,其中包括不健康内容.由于同学们辨别能力有限,有时难以辨别网络内容的好坏.请以

How the Internet affects our school life 为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对网络的看法.

写作要求：

1.要表明自己的观点；

2.语句通顺,流畅；

3.90 词左右；4.可根据提示内容适当发挥,但不能出现你的真实姓名和校名.

审题指引

1 审体裁：该写作要求讨论网络怎样影响学生的学校生活,并表明自己的观点,属于议论文.

2 审内容：可从利弊两方面论述,并表明自己的观点.

3 审时态：以一般现在时为主.

4 审人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主.

框架设计

开头：开篇概括说明网络对学生的学校生活的影响.

中间：主体段落详细分析网络给学生的学校生活带来的影响,可以分为好的影响和不好的影响.

结尾：最后用总结性语言表明自己的观点.

段落素描

1.First paragraph: The development of the Internet has changed people's life. As far as we students are concerned,

it brings us ...(At present, the Internet has a significant impact on the life of people, especially the life of junior high

school students.)

(...)

2. The body: Honestly speaking, the Internet makes it convenient for us students to seek information online. For

example...However, the Internet has a negative effect on us if we ... (Indeed, it is convenient for us to ...However,

the Internet is likely to have a bad effect on us if we ...)

(...)

3.Last paragraph: In my mind, we should learn to use the Internet rationally. Specifically, we can... (Therefore,

we are supposed to make rational use of the Internet,and...)

(...)

范本淬炼

How the Internet affects our school life

The development of the Internet has changed people's life. ① As far as we students are concerned, it brings us

both convenience and trouble.

Honestly speaking, the Internet makes it ② convenient for us students to seek information online. For

example, we can easily find reading materials, and ③ explore the answers to the questions in our studies. However,

the Internet has a negative effect on us if we cannot ④ make rational use of it. For instance, some students spend

too much time playing online games, ⑤ chatting with their friends, seeing films, or even visiting unhealthy

websites. All this has a bad effect on their studies.

In my mind, we should learn to use the Internet rationally. ⑥ Specifically, we can mainly use it in our search

for information about our studies instead of information about our ⑦ recreations.

① as far as we students are concerned,就我们学生而言.

②convenient,方便的.

③explore,探索.

④ make rational use of it,合理利用它.

⑤ chat with sb.,和某人聊天.

⑥ specifically,具体说来.

⑦recreations,娱乐.

亮点点评

1.本文围绕网络对学校生活的影响这一主题展开论述,段落设计合理,条理清晰.

2.文中用 honestly speaking 和in my mind 自然地衔接不同段落；第二段在举例时还用了 for example 和

for instance 这类衔接语.这些都令文章衔接自然,过渡顺畅.

3.文中使用了 as far as, concerned, convenience, seek information online, reading materials, a negative effect,

make rational use of, unhealthy, specifically 等出彩的短语,提升了文章档次.

How the Internet affects our school life

At present, the Internet has ① a significant impact on the life of people, especially the life of junior high

school students.

Indeed,② it is convenient for us to search the Internet for the information that we need in our studies,③

including plenty of learning resources and the answers to the questions in our studies. However, the Internet ④ is

likely to have a bad effect on us if we cannot make proper use of it. For example, if we ⑤ spend too much time

playing online games, chatting with our friends, or watching ⑥ unhealthy videos, our studies will be affected badly.

Therefore, we ⑦ are supposed to make rational use of the Internet, and we cannot spend too much time on

online recreations.

① a significant impact,重要影响.

② it is convenient for sb.to do sth.,某人做某事很方便；it 是形式主语.

③including,包括.

④ be likely to do sth.,可能会做某事.

⑤ spend too much time doing sth.,花费太多时间做某事.

⑥ unhealthy videos,不健康的视频.

⑦ be supposed to,应该.

亮点点评

1.本文紧扣网络对学校生活的影响这一主题,分三段展开论述,要点齐全,内容完整.

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