初中英语九年级主题作文10-礼仪文化

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主题：礼仪文化

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本单元的主题是用英语介绍不同国家的礼仪文化.同学们通过探讨初次见面交往礼仪、拜访朋友的礼仪

以及餐桌礼仪等,将会了解一些国家的文化习俗,学会尊重文化差异,培养文化自信.

适用于本单元的关联主题有很多,如：Table manners in China, Manners in Western countries 等等.

题目回放

学校下周要举办关于餐桌礼仪的英语演讲比赛.作为班里选出的代表,请你自拟标题,完成一篇英语演讲

稿.

写作要求：1.语句通顺,条理清楚；

2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名；

3.词数 90 左右.

审题指引

1 审体裁：介绍说明餐桌礼仪,属于说明文,但可最后加一点议论.

2 审内容：主体内容可写两三种餐桌礼仪,如吃饭时要尊重老人；不能把筷子插在碗里或有意指着他人；吃

饭时不能大声说话.

3审时态：主体时态为一般现在时.

4审人称：以第一人称为主.

框架设计

开头：演讲稿的开场白.

中间：介绍餐桌礼仪.

结尾：自己对餐桌礼仪的感受.

段落素描

1. First paragraph: Ladies and gentlemen, It is my great honor to give you a speech on table manners in China.

(...)

2. The body: First of all, we are not supposed to stick our chopsticks into the bowl because ... Besides, we are not

allowed to ...Last but not least, it is impolite for young people to ...

(...)

3. Last paragraph: To sum up, we are supposed to follow the table manners in China while eating. As the saying

goes,... Thanks for your listening.(Anyway, table manners vary from country to country. Just remember,“ When in

Rome, do as the Romans do.” Thanks for your listening.)

(...)

范本淬炼

Table manners in China

Ladies and gentlemen,

China is a great country ① with special table manners. Let me introduce some of them to you.

First of all, we are not supposed to stick our chopsticks into the bowl because some people believe that it is ②

a sacrificial rite for a person's late relative. Besides, we are not allowed to point at others with our chopsticks, ③

for that makes them feel uncomfortable. Last but not least, it is impolite of young people to eat first if there are

elderly people at table.

④To sum up, we are supposed to follow the table manners in China while eating. As the saying

goes,⑤“When in Rome, do as the Romans do.” Thanks for your listening.

① with special table manners 是介词短语充当后置定语.

② a sacrificial rite for a person's late relative,针对一个人的已故亲戚的献祭仪式.

③for,因为,并列连词.

④to sum up,总之.

⑤这句谚语的意思是：入乡随俗.

亮点点评

1.文章从不同角度描述了中国的餐桌礼仪,结构合理,要点完整,层次分明.

2.文中用词和句式丰富,使用了 be supposed to do sth., be allowed to do sth.,以及状语从句、宾语从句、it 充当

形式主语等句式,提升了文章的可读性.

3.first of all, besides, last but not least, to sum up 等衔接语运用贴切自然,使上下文连接更紧密.

Table manners in China

Ladies and gentlemen,

It is my great honor ① to give you a speech on table manners in China.

Table manners play an important role in ② traditional Chinese culture. While eating, most Chinese people ③

use chopsticks instead of knives and forks. Children should know that they are not expected to eat first if there are

elderly people at table to show respect to them. Besides, we must not ④ stick chopsticks into the bowl, which is

believed to bring bad luck. At last, we are not allowed to speak ⑤ with our mouths full of food.

Anyway, table manners ⑥ vary from country to country. Just remember,“ When in Rome, do as the Romans

do.” Thanks for your listening.

①to give...,动词不定式短语充当真正的主语,it 是形式主语.

②traditional Chinese culture,中国传统文化.

③ use chopsticks instead of knives and forks,用筷子而不是刀叉.

④ stick chopsticks into the bowl,把筷子插到碗里.

⑤with+名词＋形容词短语,构成独立主格结构,充当状语

⑥vary,不同.

亮点点评

1.本文从不同角度谈论了餐桌礼仪中几个需要注意的问题,结构严谨,主题明确.

2.用 besides, at last, anyway 等衔接语,把整篇文章衔接起来,增强了文章的逻辑性.

3.开篇用演讲中的常用句式,后面用 while doing 结构、宾语从句、非限制性定语从句,加上结尾的谚语,

给文章增色不少.

4.灵活运用高级词汇、短语,如 play an important role in, while eating, be expected to do sth., show respect

to 等,增强了文章的生动性.

佳作赏析

How to behave well

① Behaving well is the secret to good communication with others. There are some rules that we should

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