初中英语九年级主题作文9-兴趣爱好

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主题：兴趣爱好

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本单元的主题是用英语谈论兴趣爱好,如日常生活中同学们喜爱的音乐、电影、书籍等等.同学们可以

运用所学定语从句等句式深层次地表达自己内心的真实感受,培养积极的、有意义的兴趣爱好,树立正确的

人生观和价值观.

可适用于本单元的关联主题有很多,如My hobby (hobbies),... changes me a lot, I like...best 等等.

题目回放

每个人在生活中都有自己的爱好.请以 My hobby 为题,谈谈自己的爱好.

写作要求：

1.你的爱好是什么?

2.你为什么喜欢它?

3.90 词左右,文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名.

审题指引

1 审体裁：记叙文,可夹叙夹议.

2 审内容：描述自己的爱好,说明喜欢的原因,并简单谈谈自己的感受.

3 审时态：主体时态为一般现在时或一般过去时.

4 审人称：以第一人称为主.

框架设计

开头：点出主题,说明自己的爱好是什么.

中间：具体论述自己的爱好,以及喜欢的原因.

结尾：呼应主题,谈谈自己的感受.

段落素描

1. First paragraph: Different people have different hobbies. I like ...(No doubt, people's hobbies vary from person

to person. As for me, I love...)

(...)

2. The body: I love ... in my spare time. When I ...,I always ...on weekends. Now I find that ... makes me relaxed

when I feel stressed out. Also,...helps me ...Most importantly,...

(...)

3. Last paragraph: I have benefited a lot from ..., and I will keep the habit of ... (In my mind, ... brings a colorful

life to me. I will not give up this habit in my spare time.)

(...)

范本淬炼

My hobby

Different people have different hobbies. ① As for me, I like reading best.

I love reading in my spare time. After I finish my homework on weekdays, I always ② do some reading. On

weekends, I usually read books instead of watching TV or ③ visiting the Internet. Now I find that reading makes

me relaxed when I feel stressed out. Also, reading helps me make good friends because readers show the same

interest and can help each other. Most importantly, reading ④ broadens my horizons, and helps me ⑤ improve my

reading ability and even my writing skills.

I have ⑥ benefited a lot from reading, and I will keep the habit of reading.

① as for me,至于我,用该短语引出下文.

② do some reading,进行一些阅读.

③ visit the Internet,访问互联网.

④ broaden my horizons,拓宽我的视野.

⑤ improve my reading ability,提高我的阅读能力.

⑥ benefit a lot from reading,从阅读中受益匪浅.

亮点点评

1.本文紧扣主题,开头用简洁的语言点出自己的爱好即阅读,中间段落从多个方面论述了阅读的好处,结

尾用一句话概括主题,结构合理,逻辑清晰.

2.用 as for me, also, most importantly 等衔接语,使行文通顺流畅.

3.运用状语从句和宾语从句等从句丰富了文章句式.

4.文中运用了一些好词妙语,如 in sb.'s spare time, instead of, feel stressed out, broaden sb.'s horizons,

improve sb.'s reading ability, benefit a lot from 等.

My favorite hobby

I have a number of hobbies,① among which reading is my favorite.

In my spare time, I lose my heart to reading. In my mind, reading is ② an effective way to broaden my

horizons and improve my studies. Moreover, whenever I feel tired in my studies, I will read some storybooks or

picture books,③ which make me relaxed. Most importantly, I can make friends with those who love reading.

In all, reading ④ makes a big difference to me in my life. I have benefited a lot from reading, and I believe

that reading can make my life colorful and meaningful.

① among,在··..··(三者或以上)当中,后面是 which 引导的非限制性定语从句.

② an effective way,有效方法.

③which 引导非限制性定语从句.

④ make a big difference to...,对·····产生很大影响.

亮点点评

1.本文开头直接点明主题,主体段落从多个层面阐述了阅读这一爱好带来的好处,结尾总结感受.首尾呼

应,层次分明,结构严谨.

2. 使用 in my spare time, in my mind, moreover, most importantly, in all 等衔接语,使文章衔接更加流畅.

3.文中使用定语从句、时间状语从句、宾语从句等复杂句式,使语言结构更丰富饱满.

4.比起上面二类文,文中词汇运用更为丰富,如使用了 lose sb.'s heart to, effective, make a big difference to,

colorful, meaningful 等.

佳作赏析

I like playing the guitar

No doubt,① people's hobbies vary from person to person. As for me, I love playing the guitar.

Whenever I have time, I would like to play the guitar. It helps ② develop my intelligence, focus attention on

what I am doing, and ③ promote my appreciation of art. Besides, it helps me relax after the ④ five-day-long busy

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