初中英语九年级主题作文7-谈论规则

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主题：谈论规则

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本单元的主题是用英语谈论规则,可使用含情态动词的被动语态.通过对校规、家规等规则的讨论,同学

们会对规则产生敬畏感,从而做一个懂规则、守规矩的公民.介绍规则以让人了解,属于说明文范畴；议论和

评价规则,属于议论文范畴；以书信形式谈论规则,属于应用文范畴.

可适用于本单元的关联话题有很多,如School rules, Family rules, Library rules, Cinema rules, Laboratory

rules 等等.

题目回放

假如你是李明,你的美国朋友 Mike 向你询问你校的校规.请你根据以下要点和要求,用英语给他回复一封

邮件.

写作要求：

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名；

2.自拟标题,词数 90 左右.

审题指引

1 审体裁：本文要求通过回复邮件的形式介绍校规,属于应用文.

2 审内容：着重写有关着装、考勤、行为安全等的规则.

3 审时态：主体时态为一般现在时.

4 审人称：以第一人称为主.

框架设计

开头：回复邮件的问候语及点题.

中间：至少从三个方面介绍校规.

结尾：谈谈自己对校规的感受.

段落素描

1. First paragraph: How are things going these days? Let me...

(...)

2.The body: First of all, we must ... This helps us ...Second,...

(...)

3.Last paragraph: Even though ... I benefit a lot ...

(...)

Yours,

Li Ming

范本淬炼

Our school rules

Dear Mike,

How are things going these days? I am glad that you ① are interested in our school rules. Let me introduce

some of them.

First, we should get to school on time and take a ②30-minute reading of textbooks before class in the

morning. ③ What is more, we need to clean the classroom every day and keep it clean. In addition, we ④ are

supposed to listen carefully in class and finish our homework after school.

I think that these school rules help us ⑤ develop our good habits. Do you think so?

Yours,

Li Ming

① be interested in,对······感兴趣.

②30-minute,三十分钟的,这是个复合形容词.

③ what is more,此为衔接语,能使文章过渡自然.

④ be supposed to do sth.,应当做某事.

⑤ develop our good habits,养成我们的好习惯.

亮点点评

1.整体框架设计和段落布局合理,思路清晰,层次感较强.

2.衔接自然顺畅,使用了 first, what is more, in addition 等衔接语.

3.运用了较多近义词,如should, need, be supposed to,以避免词汇重复.

Our school rules

Dear Mike,

How are you getting along these days? I am glad to know that you ① show a great interest in our school rules.

Let me introduce some of them to you.

First of all, we must wear school uniforms every day. This helps us ② focus our attention on our studies.

Another point worth mentioning is that we must get to school on time. ③ Thanks to this rule, I have developed a

good habit of getting up early. Besides, we are supposed to greet our teachers when we meet them. In addition, we

④ are required to do our homework carefully and hand it in on time. Indeed, some of these school rules are strict,

but ⑤ I believe that if we obey these rules, we will make progress every day in our schoolwork.

I am looking forward ⑥ to knowing some of your school rules.

Yours,

Li Ming

① show a great interest in,对······显示出很大兴趣.

② focus our attention on,集中我们的注意力于.

③ thanks to...,多亏

④ be required to,被要求,此为被动结构.

⑤I believe 后接宾语从句,表明自己的观点.

⑥to 为介词,其后 knowing 为动名词.

亮点点评

1.本文与上篇文章相比,除能紧扣主题外,内容更加饱满,不仅描述校规,还能表达自己的感受及遵守校规

给自己带来的变化.

2.衔接自然,衔接语 first of all, another point worth mentioning, thanks to ..., besides, in addition 等运用自如,

行文流畅.

3.句式多变,多处使用从句,如宾语从句、表语从句、状语从句.

4.词汇丰富,如使用 introduce ... to, focus sb.'s attention on, thanks to, develop a good habit of, be required to,

look forward to 等亮点词汇.

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