初中英语九年级主题作文5-介绍物品

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主题：介绍物品

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本单元基于制作生活中的常见物品及中国传统文化中的剪纸及陶泥等 ,引领同学们试着用英语描述某种

物品的材质、产地、用途等.同学们可以试着用英语介绍生活中所喜爱的某样物品,所喜爱的某种运动,时下

科技产品如学习软件和网购软件等的特征与功能,某一地点如家乡或名胜古迹的地理位置、历史、气候、环

境、特色食品以及值得参观的理由等.

可适用于本单元的主题有很多,如The Chinese knot, My favorite sport, My hometown 等.

题目回放

人们常说,生命在于运动.的确,运动不仅让我们身体健康,而且使我们的生活充满活力和幸福.请自拟标题,

写一篇 90 词左右的英语短文,介绍一下生活中常见的运动和你的看法.

审题指引

1 审体裁：说明文,可夹叙夹议.

2 审内容：介绍生活中的运动并提出自己的看法.

3 审时态：以一般现在时为主.

4 审人称：以第三人称为主.

框架设计

开头：点明人们喜爱的运动.

中间：主体段落介绍一种或两种运动形式及有关细节.

结尾：总结并提出自己的看法.

段落素描

1.First paragraph: Sports are enjoyed by...

(...)

2. The body: The most common sport is ... It is so popular that ...Another sport worth mentioning is ...,which...

(...)

3.Last paragraph: Sports can make us ...Let's ...

(...)

范本淬炼

Football, a popular sport

Sports ① are enjoyed by a great many people. When we talk about sports, we ② cannot but mention

Football, which helps build up the body and develop friendship, is ③ popular with the people throughout the

world, and has almost become a part of their life. Every day, football matches are going on here and there around

the world. ④ If we read a newspaper, turn on the TV, or ⑤ surf the Internet, we will find information about football

easily. People ⑥ enjoy playing football and watching football matches after work. When their favorite team wins,

they will ⑦ cheer for it; when it fails, they will feel sad.

As we can see, football is around us in our daily life. Let's ⑧ enjoy the pleasure of football.

① are enjoyed...是被动结构.

② cannot but mention football. football,不能不提到足球.

③ popular with the people throughout the world,深受全世界人民的欢迎.

④if 引导条件状语从句.

⑤ surf the Internet,上网.

⑥ enjoy doing sth.,享受做某事.

⑦ cheer for...,为···...加油.

⑧ enjoy the pleasure of football,享受足球的乐趣.

亮点点评

1.文章结构合理,层次分明.开篇直接点题,中间主体段落集中说明主题,结尾再次扣题并表达感想.

2.文中时态运用灵活准确,而且句式富于变化,恰当运用了时间状语从句、非限制性定语从句、条件状语

从句等从句.

3.作者注意使用了较为丰富的词汇和短语,如 cannot but mention, build up the body, develop friendship,

cheer for, pleasure 等.

Sports

Almost all people like sports,① from which they gain different kinds of pleasure.

Basketball ② is believed to be a favorite sport of most people, for it ③ strengthens the body and attracts

spectators with the clever skills of passing and catching the ball. Football is also one of people's favorite sports. As

it helps ④ build up the body and develop friendship, it is welcomed by people across the globe, and has almost

become a part of their life. Another ⑤ sport worth mentioning is table tennis, which exercises the body and the

mind, and ⑥ is favored by almost all people worldwide, especially the Chinese people.

In all, sports ⑦ make us strong and bring us happiness. Let's play sports right now!

①介词 from 加 which 引导非限制性定语从句.

② be believed to...是被动结构.

③ strengthen,增强.

④ build up the body,增强体质.

⑤ sport worth mentioning,值得一提的运动.

⑥is favored,是被动结构,受到青睐.

⑦ make us strong,使我们强壮.

亮点点评

1.这篇作文紧扣主题,从不同角度描写了篮球、足球、乒乓球这些常见的体育运动,内容完整,段落清晰.

2.句式丰富多变,如使用了定语从句、被动句、并列句、状语从句等；多种句式交替使用,优于二类文.

3.句子衔接自然,如使用 for, as, and, in all 等衔接语,使文章前后衔接紧密,表达流畅.

4.词语运用丰富,尤其是几个关键动词,如 gain, strengthen, attract, make, bring 等,增强了文章感染力.

佳作赏析

A Chinese knot

A Chinese knot, a knot woven of a single cord or rope, ① dates back to ancient times, when Chinese ancestors

used it to record events or do other things.

Usually ② shaped like a diamond, a Chinese knot is made of red silk, cloth, or other materials. ③ As an

elegant kind of handiwork, it is used as a home decoration, a gift for special occasions, and even an adornment on

clothes. One of ④ the symbols of traditional Chinese culture, a Chinese knot stands for friendship, love, happiness

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