初中英语九年级主题作文3-打听介绍

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主题：打听介绍

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本单元的主题是用英语谈论如何有礼貌地提出请求或打听信息.围绕本单元的主题及教材所给的语言材

料,同学们将学会灵活运用宾语从句等句式表达请求或给予别人帮助,还可以拓展主题,学会介绍某地或某个

特定的生活环境等.

可适用于本单元的关联话题有很多,如 A consultation letter, An invitation to the Dragon Boat Festival,

Asking for information 等.

题目回放

假如你叫李华,是新华中学的九年级学生.今年暑假你想参加北京英语夏令营(the Beijing English Summer

Camp).请你自拟标题,用英语写封信向负责人林老师咨询一些信息.

内容包括：

1.介绍自己的一些基本信息,如姓名、英语能力等；

2.礼貌地询问信息,如时间、准备、食宿、活动、英语学习等；

3.表示感谢.

写作要求：

1.不得出现你的真实姓名和校名等信息；

2.词数 90 左右.

审题指引

1 审体裁：询问信息,属于说明文.

2审内容：自己的个人情况介绍；用礼貌用语咨询信息；表达谢意.

3审时态：以一般现在时为主.

4 审人称：以第一人称为主.

框架设计

开头：以自我介绍的形式引出写作话题,即咨询信息.

中间：以礼貌的询问方式咨询相关信息.

结尾：以表达感谢结束.

段落素描

1. First paragraph: I am ... I am interested in ... I would like to ...

(...)

2.The body: Could you tell me ...? I also want to know ...

(...)

3. Last paragraph: Thank you for helping me, and I am looking forward to your reply.

(...)

Yours,

Li Hua

范本淬炼

A consultation letter

Dear Mr. Lin,

I am Li Hua, a 9th-grader from Xinhua Middle School. I love English, and I want to improve my English. I

would like to go to Beijing for the English Summer Camp. I am writing ① to know more information about it.

I ② would like to know when the summer camp will begin, how long it will last, what the participants will do,

and where they will stay. What is more, please let me know the ③ accommodation costs, and the living conditions

of the hotel.

Thank you very much for your help. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

① to know...,动词不定式表明写信的目的.

② would like to know 后加 when, how long, what, where 引导的宾语从句,展开话题.

③ accommodation costs,住宿费.

亮点点评

1.本文用三段布局段落.第一段引出话题,中间段展开咨询,第三段表达谢意.段落设计合理,层次分明.

2.文章恰当地运用了礼貌用语和宾语从句等句式,读起来顺畅、自然.

3.文章用语较为丰富,如使用了 9th-grader, improve, participant, accommodation costs, living conditions,提

升了文章档次.

A consultation letter

Dear Mr. Lin,

My name is Li Hua, and I am a 9th-grade student from Xinhua Middle School. I ① am interested in language

learning, and I hope to improve my English. There fore, I would like to go to Beijing for the English Summer

Camp. I wonder ② if you can give me some information about it.

First, please tell me when the summer camp will start, how long it will last, what the ③ participants need to

prepare before leaving home, what they will do during the summer camp, and where they will stay. Besides, I

would like to know the ④ living conditions of the hotel. Moreover, I want to know whether ⑤ it is convenient to

go shopping near the hotel.

Thank you very much for your help. I am expecting your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

①用 be interested in language learning 表达对语言学习的兴趣.

②if 引导宾语从句.

③participant,参与人.

④living conditions,居住条件.

⑤it 充当形式主语,指代后面的动词不定式.

亮点点评

1.文章段落布局合理,要点齐全,内容完整.主体段落用形式多样并且规范的礼貌用语,恰当完成了各项信

息的咨询.

2.文中句式多样,宾语从句等句式运用准确到位.

3.上下文衔接语运用得当,使用了 first, besides, moreover 等词,使文章衔接自然.

4.文章语言丰富,使用了 improve, living conditions, convenient 等用语,增强了语言感染力.整体上看,比起

上一篇文章,本文句式、用词更为丰富.

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