初中英语九年级主题作文2-传统节日

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主题：传统节日

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本单元的主题是用英语谈论我国的传统节日,这是传统文化的重要表现形式.通过学习本单元内容,同学

们可提炼恰当的英语句式,学会用它们介绍传统节日和庆祝方式.

可适用于本单元的关联话题有很多,如 The traditional Chinese festivals, The Mid-Autumn Festival, The

Spring Festival 等.

题目回放

我国历史悠久,拥有灿烂的文化.近年来我国传统文化越来越受到世界各国关注 .鉴于此,你校拟举办中国

传统节日－中秋节的英语征文比赛.请你以 The Mid-Autumn Festival 为题,按下列要求介绍该节日.

写作要求：

1.语句通顺,表达准确,内容连贯；

2.文中不能出现你的真实姓名和校名等相关信息；

3.词数 90 左右.

审题指引

1 审体裁：介绍节日习俗,属于说明文.2 审内容：从时间、寓意、饮食及习俗等几个方面介绍.

3 审时态：以一般现在时为主.

4 审人称：以第三人称为主.

框架设计

开头：由中国文化谈到中秋节.

中间：从时间、寓意、饮食等方面介绍中秋节.

结尾：简单谈谈对中秋节的感受.

段落素描

1. First paragraph:... Traditional festivals in China play an important role ...Among them, the Mid-Autumn

Festival...

(...）

2. The body:... is celebrated on ..., when people ...Besides...

(...）

3.Last paragraph:...makes us... I enjoy...

(...）

范本淬炼

The Mid-Autumn Festival

There are many ① traditional festivals in China. Among them the Mid-Autumn Festival is very important.

The Mid-Autumn Festival ② is celebrated on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. It is a time for family

members to get together. They eat mooncakes,③ shaped like the full moon during that night. They give the best

wishes to their relatives ④ who they love and miss. Besides, they share different kinds of fruit, and stay together to

watch the moon during that night.

I love the Mid-Autumn Festival. It ⑤ makes me relaxed during the holiday, and feel the warmth of my family.

① traditional festival,传统节日.

②...is celebrated 是被动语态.

③ shaped like the full moon during that night,形状像那天晚上的满月.

④who 引导定语从句.

⑤ make me relaxed,让我放松.

亮点点评

1.该篇作文能够紧扣主题,段落清晰,逻辑性强.第一段点题,中间段落从节日的时间、饮食等方面用向人

们完整展示了中秋节,第三段总结并谈感受.

2.there be 结构、被动语态、定语从句等句式,运用准确.

3.用语较为丰富,使用了 celebrate, lunar month, shaped like, relative, feel the warmth 等,为文章添彩.一类

文

The Mid-Autumn Festival

As an important part of Chinese culture, traditional festivals ① play a significant role in China; among them,

the Mid-Autumn Festival is no doubt worth mentioning.

The Chinese people celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month,② when family

members get together to enjoy a special kind of food, known as mooncakes shaped like the full moon during that

night. ③ After eating mooncakes, they usually watch the full moon together while sharing different kinds of fruit.

④ Moreover, they convey their wishes to their relatives or friends who they love and miss.

I like the Mid-Autumn Festival,⑤ when I can have a good rest, and enjoy the warmth of the family.

① play a significant role,发挥重要作用.

②when 引导非限制性定语从句.

③ after eating...充当时间状语,简洁明了.

④moreover,此外.⑤when 引导非限制性定语从句.

亮点点评

1.文章紧扣主题,要点齐全,内容完整.“三段式”段落清晰,主要段落集中说明主题,从节日的时间、饮食

和习俗等方面,向人们完整介绍了中秋节.

2.文章用词丰富,使用了 significant, celebrate, lunar month, get together, known as, shaped like, different

kinds of fruit 等“亮眼”词语.

3.文章句式多样,使用了非限制性定语从句、过去分词充当后置定语、现在分词充当伴随状语等 ,彰显了

作者较强的语言表达能力.

佳作赏析

My favorite festival

My favorite festival is the Spring Festival, ① which is celebrated on the first day of the first lunar month.

On the eve of the Spring Festival, the Chinese people always ② set off fireworks, expecting to drive away bad

luck. The most important thing to do is ③ that all family members get together to have a grand dinner, and eat

dumplings in particular. Besides, most people visit their ④ relatives and friends. Young children usually get lucky

money from elder generations.

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