Unit 2 单元话题满分范文必背-2022-2023学年八年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（人教版）

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Unit 2 How often do you exercise?

单元话题满分范文必背

1．某校刊英文专栏正在征集有关青少年健康话题的文章, 请根据以下图示, 以How to keep healthy 为题写

一篇征文。

要求: 1. 必须包括图示中 1~3 项内容, 可适当发挥;

2. 词数: 60~80。

How to keep healthy

【答案】How to keep healthy

Everyone wants to be healthy. Firstly, I think a good eating habit is very important. We should eat lots of

vegetables and fruit. We shouldn't eat too much junk food. Drinking milk is also good for health. Secondly, we

should have enough sleep. Usually we need at least eight hours' sleep every night. Thirdly, we need to exercise,

such as walking, running and playing ball games. Exercise is good for the mind and the body. Of course there are

many other ways to keep healthy. But I think having good habits is the most important.

【解析】

【详解】

本题是一篇话题作文，话题是 How to keep healthy。根据题目可知本文主要时态是一般现在时。仔细阅读

提示，根据提示写出提纲，根据提纲写作。提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思

和想象。内容要包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，写作要涉及所有提示要点，字数应该在 70 词以

上，不要写得太少。语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻

辑关系。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。

提纲：首先总写，然后内容分三或四点写，每个点再分几个小点写，最后总写。（一）总写（Everyone

wants to be healthy.）（二）分写，第一点 Firstly, I think a good eating habit is very important.（1）We should

eat lots of vegetables and fruit. （2）We shouldn't eat too much junk food. （3）Drinking milk is also good for

health.第二点，Secondly, we should have enough sleep. Usually we need at least eight hours' sleep every night.

第三点，Thirdly, we need to exercise, such as walking, running and playing ball games. Exercise is good for the

mind and the body.最后总写，Of course there are many other ways to keep healthy. But I think having good

habits is the most important.

【点睛】

这是一篇比较优秀的作文，语言表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句

子通顺。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有

逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）学生要运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型。

（3）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（4）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句

子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。（5）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。（6）注意

检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

2．良好的生活与学习习惯对我们的成长是非常重要的。请以“My good habits”为题，从以下的习惯中选

择一个你以前做得不够好，但现在已具备的好习惯，谈一谈你养成这个习惯的过程及它的益处。

要求：1. 不使用真实的校名、人名等相关信息；2. 内容完整，书写整齐；3. 不少于 80 词。

Good

habits

→sleeping habits

→eating habits

→learning habits

【答案】例文

My good habit

Early to bed and early to rise is my good habit. One year ago，when I was a Grade 7 student，I liked

reading books in bed. Every day after I finished my homework，I stayed up to read books until midnight. The

next day I couldn't get up on time. I used to be late for school，and I felt tired in class. It was too bad. With the

help of my teacher and my parents，I gave up the bad habit. Now I go to bed early and get up early. I never go to

school late again. As a result，I'm much stronger and doing better in my studies now.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本题目属于记叙文写作，写作时注意题干要求是现在已具备的好习惯，描述自己养成这个好

习惯的过程以及这个习惯给自己带来的好处。可以从睡觉习惯，吃饭习惯和学习习惯几方面进行考虑。

2.例文点评：例文采用一段式，直接进行描写。时态一般过去时和一般现在时，一般过去时描述自己改变

习惯的过程，一般现在时描述该好习惯给自己带来的益处。例文主要描述了睡眠习惯，之前会熬夜，导

致第二天无法早起，上课犯困。改变习惯之后，我身体更加强壮，学习也更好了。

3.高分亮点：

短语：like doing sth；stay up；used to do；be late for；with the help of；give up；as a result。

句型：when 引导的时间状语从句；With 的复合结构。

3．为了配合该活动，你班将举行一次主题班会。请你以“Sports and Health”为题写一篇发言稿，介绍你

自己的体育锻炼情况、感受等。文中不能出现真实的姓名、地名、校名。词数 80 左右。发言稿的开头与

结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

以下要点供参考：

(1)自己的锻炼情况；

(2)最喜欢的体育活动及原因；

(3)锻炼的效果及感受；

(4)倡议大家积极参与体育锻炼。

Dear friends,

I am very glad to be here to say something about sports and health.

That’s all. Thank you!

【答案】Dear friends，

I’m very glad to be here to say something about sports and health．I love sports．My favorite sport is playing

basketball．I like it because it’s exciting and good for my health．I usually play basketball with my best friends

on the playground after school．I also enjoy playing ping-pong and swimming．

I am stronger than before because I keep on taking exercise almost every day．“Keeping doing sports an hour a

day，you can work healthily for fifty years and live a happy life all the time．” So I hope all of us can take an

active part in sports，and also I wish everybody good health．

That’s all．Thank you!

Yours,

Tony

【解析】

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