Unit 4 单元话题满分范文必背-2022-2023学年九年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（牛津译林版）

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Unit 4 Growing up

单元话题满分范文必背

1．北京冬奥会已经落幕，世界各地的运动健儿参加这一盛会。大家会不会为运动员们的获奖而激动，

为他们的坚持而感动？

想想你最崇拜的一位运动员是谁，以 My favorite athlete 为题，写一篇英语作文。

要点：1. 介绍你最崇拜的运动员。

2. 为什么最崇拜他/她？

3. 你从他/她身上学到了什么？

写作要求：

1. 包括以上所有要点，并作适当发挥；

2. 条理清楚，语句通顺,意思连贯，书写规范；

3. 80—100 词左右。

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【答案】例文

My favorite athlete

My favorite athlete is Ma Long. He is one of the best table tennis players in the world.

Ma Long was born in Anshan, Liaoning province. He has been playing table tennis since his childhood. At

the 2020 Tokyo Olympic Games, Ma Long tried his best and won the first place. All Chinese people are proud of

him.

Although Ma Long showed his talent at an early age, he still worked hard. Like every other athlete, he faces

difficulties in training, but he never gives up. From his experience, I have learned that we can do almost anything

if we never lose heart. He is my hero!

【解析】

题干解读：题目要求以 My favorite athlete 为题写一篇英语短文；要求包含所有要点提示。

写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，采用第三人称口吻。此作文可采用 3段落格式，

第一段：介绍最喜欢的运动员；第二段：描述为什么崇拜他；第三段：描述你学到了什么。

2．2022 北京冬奥会 2金1银得主谷爱凌（Eileen Gu）在接受采访说要感谢妈妈对她的教育与帮助。

从她的成功经历上可以看出，每一个人的成长与别人的帮助是分不开的。那么在你的学习生活中你最感

恩的人是谁？他/她给了你哪些帮助？请以李华的名义在网上发表你的看法。

提示：

1. 不可出现真实姓名与地址；

2. 观点表述正确，语句通顺；

3. 不少于 80 词。

参考词汇：北京冬奥会 Olympic Winter Games Beijing 2022；金牌 gold medal；银牌 silver medal；同龄人

contemporary

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【答案】例文：

Eileen Gu once said in an interview that she is thankful to her family especially her mother. As a winner of

two gold medals and one silver medal in Olympic Winter Games Beijing 2022, she is sure to be the most

successful one among her contemporaries. With the help of her family, she reached her goals by hard working.

Yes, we can’t just grow up by ourselves. We need help from others on our way to success. And for me, I’d

like to show my thanks to my father, who was always there whenever I needed help. From my primary school to

my college, he helped to get over the difficulties I faced, he encouraged me, and stood by my side. I will never

forget what he did for me.

【解析】

【详解】

1. 题干解读：本题要求以李华的名义在网上发表不少于 80 词的看法，内容包括：介绍谷爱凌获得的荣誉，

你最感恩的人以及这个人给你的帮助。

2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一和第三人称进行写作，时态主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时；写作时

应紧扣题目要求和参考词汇进行发挥；写作完成后应确保文章内容齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英

文表达习惯。

3．某英语杂志社正在开展“我心中的奥运之星”的英语征文活动，谷爱凌在本届北京冬奥会勇夺两

金，为国人树立了良好的榜样。请结合下面表格提供的信息完成一篇征文稿。

Gu Ailing’s Personal information

Birth Job Personality Achievement(成就)

2003.9

freestyle skier,

model and

student

hard-working,

positive

•learned skiing in 2006

•won two gold medals for China at the

Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics

内容包括: 1.谷爱凌个人信息；

2.你的个人感悟。

注意：1.词数: 80-100 词（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校姓名。Have you watched the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics? Did you

notice a beautiful girl with long blond hair?

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【答案】参考范文：

Have you watched the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics? Did you notice a beautiful girl with long blond hair?

Now let me introduce her to you.

Gu Ailing, a freestyle skier, is a model as well as an excellent student. Gu Ailing was born in September,

2003, and she started to learn skiing at the age of only three because she loves the feeling of snow. The 18-year-

old girl won two gold medals for China at the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics and made history.

Gu’s positive attitude and hard work help her achieve great success. We should learn from her and never give

up when we are in trouble. She sets a good example for us, and I want to learn from her and make full use of my

time and make contributions to our country.

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