2021年中考英语作文高分模板（全国通用）

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专题十七书面表达

高分作文“十字诀”

一、结构：三段式：观点-要点-总结

二、要点：全，围绕中心

三、逻辑：逻辑词

递进：first, second, third, finally; first of all, in addition/what’s more/ more over( 都是另外的意思), in a

word/all in all(表示总结); last but not least(最后但同样重要的是)

转折：but, yet, however 等

因果：because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that,

so/such...that...

总结：in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking, to sum up, finally, in

conclusion, in summary

四、语法：硬性要求，如人称、时态、语态、从句、单复数等问题

五、亮点：高级词汇和加分句型

1. 表达不同观点看法的句型

① Different people have different ideas/opinions on this problem. 关于这个问题，不同的人有不同的观点

② Some people think that it is adj. to do sth. 一些人认为做某事是....的

③ Some of them are against the idea that it is.... 他们中有些人反对....的想法

④ As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that......(观点一或二). It is not only because......, but also

because.... All in all, the more..., the more...

2. 解决问题的句型

① In recent days, we have to face a problem--______, which is becoming more and more serious. 最近，我们不

得不面临一个问题：_______, 这个问题变得越来越严重；

② Faced with..., we should take a series of effective measures to deal with the situation. For one thing, ........(解决

方法一). For another, ......(解决方法二). Finally, .......(解决方法三).

③ I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to …, the … will become better and better. 我相信如果每个人

都能对....做出贡献，这个...将会变得越来越好。

3. 说明原因句型

① The reason for this are as follows. 这一点的几种原因如下

② For one reason is that ....... For another reason is that ..... 一个原因是...., 另一个原因是....

③ On the one hand, .......; On the other hand,....... 一方面.....，另一方面.....

4. 说明利弊型句型

① Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over .......( 作文题目 ). In fact, there are both advantages and

disadvantages in...(题目议题).

② Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. 通常来说，人们相信有

如下几点优势。

③ Just as a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.” It still has negative aspects. To begin with, 缺点一；

In addition, 缺点二.

④ To sum up, we should try to make full use of the advantages and reduce the disadvantages at the same time. In

that case, we will make a better use of ..... 总之，我们应该尽力充分利用其优势，同时减少缺点。如果那样

的话，我们将能更好的利用....

5. 正反观点式句型

① Recently we have had a discussion about whether we should..... Our opinions are divided on this topic. ( 导

入，观点有分歧)

② Most of the students are in favor of it. (正方观点) Here are the reasons why they support it. (列出 2-3 个理由)

However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点). Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s

more...In addition...(列出 2-3 个反对理由)

③ Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more benefits than harms,

so I support it. (个人观点)

6. 个人观点论述句型

① As a student, I am strongly in favor of the decision. The reasons for this are as follows. (亮明自己的观点）

② First of all..... Secondly.....Besides..... (列出 2-3 个赞成或反对的理由)

③ In conclusion, I believe that...... (总结，构成总分总结构)

7. 提出建议类句型

① I’m so glad to hear that you show a deep interest in ...... in you last last letter( 背景介绍 ). As far as I am

concerned, it would be wise to take the following suggestions. (导入下文)

② I am sorry to hear that you are troubled by something. And I am glad to give you some advice on the problem

you are faced with.

③ To begin with, I’d like to suggest that you should ..... Because it can ....... In addition, if I were you, I

would ....... This is a good way of ...... What’s more, you are supposed to....... Only then you will.....( 列举建议内

容以及理由)

④ I hope my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement. ( 表达愿

望)

8. 表达活动邀请类句型

① I know that you are interested in.... And I am writing to invite you to take part in..... (背景介绍，提出邀请)

② There is an activity about.......(活动名称), which will be held .......(活动地点). It will begin at 2:00 p.m. on

July 1st(时间) and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, .....will be put on. (活动内容).

③ Come and join us! I think we’ll have a great time. (再次提出邀请)

④ I am looking forward to your early reply. (期待早日收到回信)

9. 表达求助类句型

① ......(背景介绍). I find it is quite hard to ..... (提出问题). Therefore, I am writing this letter to ask you to do me

a favor/ give me a hand. (表达目的)

② I’m faced with some problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with....... What’s more..... What troubles me

most is that it is difficult for me to ......

③ Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help. I wonder if you can help me with these

difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me.

10. 表达感谢类句型

① Thanks to /Due to/Owing to + n./V-ing（由于，多亏……）

Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.

② Without your help, it’s impossible for me to…. (没有你的帮助，……对我来视说是不可能的)

Without your help, it’s impossible for me to get such good grades.

③ Your help makes it possible for sb. to do sth.(你的帮助使得我做某事成为可能。)

Your help makes it possible for me to change myself.

2021 年中考英语作文范文必备

1. 【低碳生活-环保】

现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边

的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“ My Low--carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的

“低碳生活”。

My Low-carbon Life

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are

polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.

　　Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when

leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.

I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.

2. 【朋友-社交】

每当朋友之间即将分手的时候，耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友!你可曾想起了我，如果你正享

受幸福，请你忘记我……”。请你以 Friends 为题，写一篇 90 词左右的短文，可以围绕主题适当展开，阐

述交友的重要性和好处。

Friends

What are friends?

We often talk about the topic with others. I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in

trouble. Don’t forget the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Friends can tell you your mistakes, though

what they say is hard for you to listen to. You can share your happiness, trouble and worry with friends. Someone

also says, “You can’t walk any step without a friend.”

So I think friends are very important to us. I would like to make as many friends as possible.

3. 【是否应该帮助陌生人-社会现象】

最近，你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的看法如何?

根据所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题，写一篇短文。

赞成帮助他人是美德；帮助他人就是帮助自己

反对怕陷入麻烦；怕被误解

Should We Help Strangers?

Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers. Different students have different

opinions.

　　 Some think we should try to help strangers. Helping others is a virtue, and helping others is helping

ourselves.We may come across some trouble and need others' help some day.If everyone isn't willing to help us

just because we are strangers to them, it's hard to imagine what our world will be like.

　　 However, some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble.Sometimes we are just

misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness.

In my opinion, we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help, but we should also

protect ourselves from getting into trouble.If everyone tries a little kindness, our world will be full of love.

4.【对我影响最深的人-人物介绍】

学校英语社团在举办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇题为 “ The Person Who Has

Influenced Me Most”的英语文章。内容要点：1. 对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈，她四十几岁;2. 她总是耐心

倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决它们;3. 作为一名医生，她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班，把

她的大部分时间都奉献给了工作;4. 所以，我认为她不仅是位好妈妈，也是名好医生。5. 我希望 ……

The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most

My mother is the person who has influenced me most.

She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As

a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to

her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.

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