06 读后续写：趣事型（两大核心技巧）-2022年高考英语读后续写技巧与训练（新高考专用）

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读后续写：趣事类
Part1：经典例文（姐弟重逢）.........................................................................................1
Part2：趣事类描写“两大核心技巧”..............................................................................3
核心技巧 1：矛盾塑造（尴尬+紧张）......................................................................3
核心技巧 2：快乐结局塑造（感激+开心）...............................................................4
Part3：灵活应用...............................................................................................................4
例1：成功的“复仇”...............................................................................................4
例2：做家务..............................................................................................................7
Part 4: 高考真题再现.........................................................................................................9
【真题 1】2021 年1月浙江卷：万圣节南瓜卡头.....................................................9
【真题 2】2017 年浙江卷：健忘而可爱的妈妈......................................................12
Part1：经典例文（姐弟重逢）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One day, I found a wallet on the street. The wallet contained only three dollars and a very old 
letter. The envelope was worn and the only thing on it was the return address. I started to open the 
letter, hoping to find some information. Then I saw the date-1990, and the signature-Beatrice. The 
letter was written several decades ago.
Then I made every effort and found out that Beatrice was now working in a hospital. I 
showed her the letter. The second she saw the letter, she took a deep breath and said, “Young man, 
this letter was the last contact I ever had with Henry. He is my only brother. I loved him very 
much. I was only 16 at the time and my brother is two years younger than me. If you can find him,
tell him I'm still looking for him,” she said and tears began to well up in her eyes. “Mother is 
waiting for him to come back home.”
When I walked out of the building with the wallet in my hand, the guard of the building 
recognized the wallet, and with his help, I finally found its owner, Henry. I handed the wallet to 
Henry and he said, “Yes, that's mine! It must have dropped out of my pocket this afternoon.”

“I read the letter in the hope of finding out who owned the wallet.” I said. The smile on his

face suddenly disappeared. He asked, “You read that letter?” “Not only did I read it, but also

Beatrice read.” I replied. He suddenly became excited. “Beatrice? You know where she is? How is

she? Please tell me,” he begged. “She's fine. She has been looking for you.” I said softly.

He grabbed my hand and said, “Sir, you know she is my only sister in this world. I've always

missed her.”

Henry and I took the elevator (电梯) down to Beatrice's room. I walked over to her.

“Beatrice,” I said softly, pointing to Henry, who was waiting with me in the doorway. “Do you

know the man?”

注意：

1．续写词数应为 150 左右；

2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Beatrice adjusted her glasses, looked for a moment, but didn't say a word．

_______________________________________________________________________________

About three weeks later I got a call at my office from Beatrice．

_______________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Paragraph 1：

Beatrice adjusted her glasses, looked for a moment, but didn't say a word．Henry said softly,

almost in a whisper, “Beatrice, it’s Henry. Do you remember me? ” She said excitedly, “Henry! I

don’t believe it! Henry! It's you! My Henry! ” He walked slowly towards her and they hugged.

The nurse and I left with tears falling down our faces.

比阿特丽斯调整了一下眼镜，看了一会儿，但一句话也没说。亨利轻声说，几乎是轻

声说，“比阿特丽斯，是亨利。你还记得我了吗？她兴奋地说，“亨利！”我不相信！亨

利！是你的名字！我的亨利先生！他慢慢地向她走去，他们拥抱在一起。护士和我离开

了，眼泪流了下来。

Paragraph 2：

About three weeks later I got a call at my office from Beatrice．“Can you break away on

Sunday to attend a party? Henry and Beatrice are going to have a party in the home! ” It was a

beautiful party with all the people dressed up to join in the celebration. If you ever wanted to see a

woman and a man acting like two teenagers, you had to see this elder sister and younger brother. It

was a perfect ending for a family affection that had lasted nearly several decades.

大约三周后，我接到比阿特丽斯的电话。“你星期天可以参加聚会吗？”亨利和比阿

特丽斯将在家里举办一个聚会！“这是一个美丽的派对，所有人都盛装参加庆祝活动。如

果你想看到一个女人和一个男人像两个青少年，你必须看到这个姐姐和弟弟。这是一个持

续了近几十年的家庭感情的完美结局。

【解析】

本文以信封为线索展开，讲述了作者在街上发现了一个钱包，在里面发现一封破旧的信，

通过努力找到信主人的姐姐，通过保安大叔找到了钱包主人，最后，姐弟重逢的故事。

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“比阿特丽斯扶了扶眼镜，看了一会儿，但没有说一句话。”可知，

第一段可描写姐弟两人重逢的温馨场景。

②由第二段首句内容“大约三周后，我在办公室接到比阿特丽斯的电话。”可知，第二段

可描写作者对重逢事件的感慨。

2.续写线索：发现信封——找到信封主人姐姐——找到主人——姐弟重逢——感谢——感

悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

接电话：get a call at/put sb on to/pick up the telephone/answer the phone

抽出时间：break away on/take time off/spare one’s time

情绪类

兴奋：did excitedly/thrilled

泪流满面：tears bathe/stream down/one’s cheeks

【点睛】

[高分句型1]：The nurse and I left with tears falling down our faces.这句话运用了 with 的复合

结构。

[高分句型2]：It was a perfect ending for a family affection that had lasted nearly several decades

这句话运用了 that 引导的定语从句。

Part2：趣事类描写“两大核心技巧”

核心技巧 1：矛盾塑造（尴尬+紧张）

1. So nervous was he that （他太紧张了）he dropped the electric carving knife.（2021.04 台

州高三调考）

2. I got into a panic（陷入惊慌之中）as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my

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