第08讲读后续写寒假开心练（名校最新真题）（解析版）-【寒假自学课】2023年高一英语寒假精品课（人教版2019）

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第08 讲读后续写寒假开心练

名校最新真题

【知识讲解】

读后续写可遵循以下方法：

（1）精读所给语言材料，理清文章脉络，明确作者的写作思路，理解文章大意。

（2）寻求前文与续写段段首句之间的内在联系，站在作者的角度，设计并发展情节，前后时态保持一致，

想象要合理，情节要连贯，并且注意前后文的续写要保持一致。

（3）后续情节一般为故事的高潮，是原作者声音的延续，因此要尽量符合原文的思路。

（4）续写内容要积极健康向上，展现事物美好的一面。

（5）平时多积累英语常用句型和地道表达，不要自己生硬的造句。以精悍短小的句子为主，长短句结合使

用。短句多使用非谓语动词，介词短语和省略。长句多使用强调句型，定语从句等。

具体语言技巧总结如下:

（1）在语言技巧上，对话除了用 say,ask 引出外，还可用以下词语。请具体语境如下

①“Why don’t you want to accept this wonderful opportunity? ”asked the boss on the phone.

② “Shall we leave now?” he whispered to us and we left the room quietly.

③ “Help! Help! I can’t swim,” screamed the frightened boy.

④ “Please don’t hurt my cat,” begged Sarah as her brother picked it up by one leg.

⑤ “ I’d like to live in a castle of my own too,” agreed the young prince.

⑥ “ Yes. I bought a car and a new flat this winter,” my father replied.

⑦ “ Are you coming with us?” shouted Li Ming to her friends on the other side of the room.

⑧ “ I didn’t like that meal at all,” complained the customer.

⑨ “ Perhaps you would like to go this way?” suggested the man shyly.

(2) 适当使用 with/without 这个介词。

①The potential house buyer came with confidence.

②The man answered without hesitation.

③With the lights on, the elderly woman left the room.

④With a book in his arm, he left the room.

⑤With so much work to do, she will have a hard time.

⑥With so much work done, she felt relaxed.

(3) 适当使用非谓语动词。

①We thanked the elderly couple and felt a sense of warmth, deeply moved.

②The owner smiled, saying, “ Tell me why you need this house.”

③“May I ask why?” I asked, surprised.

（4）使用副词：此类词可以放在句首，句尾或句中，修饰动作。

①He gave her the child to hold. Lovingly, she kissed the baby on its forehead with her cold white lips, then stared

wildly around the room, fell back—and died.

②His mother was sleeping when he woke up. Joyfully, he slid out of the room.

（5）使用形容词短语：形容词短语如果中规中矩的使用，也会失去色彩，以下列举的形容词短语可以去掉

be 动词直接放到句首或句尾，用逗号与主句隔开，起到强调作用，烘托出主人公的心理活动及变化，对主

语做重要的补充。

①

We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way bac

②

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely creature, I automatica

lly let out a cry to stop my horse.

(6) 使用强调句型

It is not mony but love that matters.

（7）使用定语从句

I want to give it to those who can fill it with love instead of money.

【真题演练】

1．（2022·黑龙江·哈尔滨市第一六二中学校高一阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语

续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150 左右。

As a fourteen-year-old girl, you may think that the biggest problem you can probably face is failing one of your

classes in high school, but not everything is as easy as it seems. My parents are going through a lot lately. We

recently moved from Houston and bought a house in Dallas, and my dad had almost no money left in the bank due to

the fact that he had to pay the water and electricity company in order for them to be available in my house.

My brother, who was a nice, happy, free-caring six-year –old boy, just like every other, started to become very

distant from us the first week we moved into the house. As much as we tried to ask him what was wrong, he

wouldn’t tell us. I was really confused by the way he acted, because he normally was a nice and kind little boy who

would often go out and play with the neighbours and would just be outside, enjoying the day. That little boy

completely turned around and became a very distant, cold child. He would keep silent and sit in his room the whole

day with the door closed. He would not go out even for supper, and we were wondering what happened.

We went to talk to his teacher who said that he was very shy when it came to talking in front of the other kids,

but he had developed a little confidence and started to play with the kids in his class. The teacher mentioned that he

and a kid from a higher level started ‘‘hanging out” away from the rest of the kids. My mum thought of it as a good

thing, thinking it meant that my brother had started to make new friends, but I knew it meant something else. I tried

talking to my brother even though he didn’t want to, but he didn’t say anything dealing with the bigger kid.

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Until one day, he came home, crying, and it seemed I was the only one who noticed.

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After a while, he gave in and started telling me that the bigger kid had stolen his lunch.

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【答案】参考范文

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Until one day, he came home, crying, and it seemed I was the only one who noticed. My brother ran to me

crying badly and I noticed a huge cut in his arm. I asked him what had happened. At first, he would not tell me and

when I gently comforted him and examined the cut, he stopped crying and held me tightly. Again I asked him to tell

me everything. He still kept silent and would not say a word. I asked if the bigger kid had bullied him.

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After a while, he gave in and started telling me that the bigger kid had stolen his lunch. I told him everything

would be OK. And I told him if anything had happened, he could tell our parents and me. So we went into the living

room and told my dad and mom about it. Our parents also felt sad and nervous, but my brother told them not to

worry. The next day we went to see the teacher and told him the whole thing. He soon called the bigger kid’s parents

and they apologized to us and my brother felt as happy as before.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家最近从休斯顿搬到达拉斯，但是作者的弟弟突然变成了

一个非常疏远、冷漠的孩子。作者很想和弟弟谈一谈问一问怎么回事，但没有得到想要的答案。

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